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Frank Hacklander posted a comment on Sunday 5th June 2016 5:09am for Motivations

Damn it! Another great story. OK, some of it was a little (a little????) over the top but in a very enjoyable way. However, I am still hanging on what happens to Wednesday, Harry et al in the last bit of that story. Now, are we going to have to wait months again for another update? I truly like your "voice." It works, regardless of the story. While this reminds me of Princess and Pureblood Princess (both of which I enjoyed by the way), relax your standards a bit. This is supposed to be fun. That said, there are a number of what appear to be grammatical and other grating errors throughout. If you really care, happy to point out what I think they are. If not, no worries. Suffice it to say, I like this, but finish something, please. Cheers for a great story.

Entilzah posted a comment on Sunday 5th June 2016 4:59am for Motivations

Glad to see the name Jeconais pop up in my feed again, and once again the story doesn't disappoint. Thanks for sharing this with us!

Kailblade posted a comment on Sunday 5th June 2016 4:59am for Motivations

Quite enjoyable. Loved this version of Ron. Sucks that he gets bashed nearly every where these days

OlorinBlack posted a comment on Sunday 5th June 2016 4:54am for Motivations

A CLIFFHANGER!!!!!! Maybe no big puzzle to a later result, but still, to make us wonder about Draco's fate? Annoying. Otherwise, as excellent as always.

apRobertson posted a comment on Sunday 5th June 2016 4:45am for Motivations

This is an awesome story. I'm glad to see your continued enjoyment in writing and sharing these stories. Thank you.

moontenshi21 posted a comment on Sunday 5th June 2016 4:40am for Motivations

Happy belated birthday! Even the mention of being thousands of feet in the air with just a piece of silk to control my fall scares me. And I always love a great concert. I loved Harry's easy going personality and how such small changes such as having a large array of friends created so many differences. Looking forward to whatever you decide to create or update next.

Lumos Kedavra posted a comment on Sunday 5th June 2016 4:33am for Motivations

Another excellent and enjoyable story! Glad to see you are still writing ... and thank you so much for continuing to share them. I find myself coming back to all your stories again and again, every year or so ... and unlike so many others, they still stay fresh, even on repeated rereading, so again, thank you!

oldsarge posted a comment on Sunday 5th June 2016 4:02am for Motivations

Happy Happy birthday. Just want to say, if this is the kind of present we receive for your birthday, then you most definately need to have many more birthdays each year!! Thanks for another quick reading "one-shot".

BTW. My birthday is coming up in August. You can have it as I am tired of them anyway and wish to just stay the same age for a while.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Sunday 5th June 2016 3:49am for Motivations

What a delight it was to see a new story by the master - I enjoyed Motivations a great deal - I liked the sparse prose, not quite telegraphic but definitely lean in setting up the history of the club and the wonderful friendships that were built, then the shift to more descriptive dialogues between the major characters.

you have an amazing skill at building characters that are instantly plausible and seen in my minds eye, even though little time is spent in descriptions.

thanks so much for another delightful story to share with my closest friends.

warmest regards

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 5th June 2016 3:04am for Motivations

Excellent story, I've always wondered why they have no squibs around since potions requires no 'wand waving' according to Snape. Of course I plan on having it be 'squib's work' just to drive him nuts. Anyway I really enjoyed it and am looking forward to your next one!

jay21317 posted a comment on Sunday 5th June 2016 3:00am for Motivations

I always adore reading your stories, each time I notice there is an update or get an email about what, I drop what I am doing and start reading.

Kind if sad that this is a one shot, I would love to know what happened after words, with the squibs, how Harry put the magic in things, and what ever else.

Finbar posted a comment on Sunday 5th June 2016 2:49am for Motivations

First, Happy Birthday, I just turned 41, so I know the midlife horror. Look on the bright side. You have your hair still. Sadly, mine has left for warmer climates.

Second: A few spelling mistakes. Nothing someone who isnt used to Fanfiction wouldn't be able to ignore, Meh, I just thought you'd be amused is all.

Finally: This reminds me of another fic. Harry/Astoria pairing, very romantic, traditional and 'proper', according to Pure Blood culture. I think it was A Maiden's Kiss or something like that.

Which is a good thing. This was a fun fic which was enjoyable to read. It has humour, an oddball cast and made fun of several facets of the wizarding world, such as Lucius and Narcissa being able to just change sides with no possible repercussions. Plus the Greengasses going for a kebab.

Overall, I give it a solid 8 out of 10.

Gardengirl posted a comment on Sunday 5th June 2016 2:09am for Motivations

Ab fab, as always, my friend! I like the parallel development of healthy relationships while he maintains connection as best he can to static, controlling figures. I was especially pleased with how Ron came along - too often he's a paper doll character with no development at all. So glad you're writing!!

Madrikor posted a comment on Sunday 5th June 2016 1:15am for Motivations

cheers for another great story.

and congrats on the big four zero. Now you just have another 2 thirds of your life left ... atleast