01.hari posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 1:35am
This one is quite unique. I don't think I've read book4 variant like this. Pace of story is good, communication between characters funny and story quite enjoyable. This isn't low standard story prior to others just having differently written and with different feel.
James Barber posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 1:34am
Hey this is brilliant! Now first of all, I saw your note and while it saddens me that your glory days of writing as you said is over, still I found this and your other writings to still be quite good and often times brilliant, especially the hp/adams family saga you have going....
As to this here story, everything was great, at first though I thought the ideal of hiring and then giving the weasley twins full access to harry's vaults was the most idiotic thing he could do, but you pulled it off to be the greatest thing he could have ever done....those lessons especially the last one with kate were extroadinary, hell I wish when I was 14/15 a woman had taken me by the hand as it were..... also dobby and what he did for a hangover cure, havent laughed like that in awhile.... oh and that bounty was also brilliant....you sure come up with some amazing things in your writings, most authors are basically copying your ideals while you come up with original ideals all the time....
And as far as you thinking your writing aint as good as it used to be, man you need to throw that ideal right out of your freaking head!!!!!
One last thing, in my opinion which I reckon dont really account for much, I think your one of the best or at least top 5 hp fanfic writers on the net....others come to mind would be radaslab, bobmin, kinsfire sorta but he do tend to get rally maudlin way to damn much, but still....there of course are others but you get the message....
Hell I usually rate authors stories as: As Good As Jeconais, or Better than Jeconais, and that last rating dont get used that often.....
So quit rapping yourself over the head, you might not write another mega-hp-saga again but your still one hell of a writer.....
Anya McLerie posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 1:34am
Oh, dear sweet heavens --- this is a GOF I'm going to love!
slashslut posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 1:34am
what a wicked and utterly brilliant take on the tri-wizard tournament! love that harry has hired bodyguards; goodness, why didn't anyone think of this sooner!!!??
Sarah5 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 1:31am
I'm enjoying the story Sirius Fred and George are all over the top Harry seems not very intelligent. Please
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 1:28am
<chuckle> This likes it's going to be quite the fun ride for Harry and those he truly considers friends; others, though, may not find it near as pleasant. I love his approach to getting "professional" help and I suspect it's going to pay off in many more ways than he expects. The Death Eater bonus should definitely disarm Tom's troops (much, likely, to Albus' dismay as several old pureblood lines will be feeling the effects of this) and 'twill be interesting to see if Peter gets swept up in the "festivities". It's not deep but it's loads of fun and I look forward to more.
blackdog posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 1:18am
I think I love you... This was absolutely histerical. Don't worry about the quality of work you are posting. Even your worst is far above average! I look forward to further installments.
Crys posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 1:16am
> “I hope I can teach you without the mess that teenagers normally go through.”
That can be taken about five different ways, all of which make sense.
Malfoy points a wand and demands that Harry "Give them back"? Wow, he's proving his levels of rampant ignorance, isn't he?
Oh, Harry? Start bottling that wine. Make some money back.
Highly entertaining little fic. Definitely looking forward to more.
metrobluejay posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 1:14am
This is awesome. Really great read and I look forward to seeing more of it.
Dervish posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 1:13am
Tim this is absolutely ...... full of win and evil all at the same time ....i hope you continue this at any pace you so choose just continue because its good
tw posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 1:13am
This is an amazing story! Thank you for sharing with us! :)
Rlpj4 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 1:13am
I definitely like this new story. I don't think I've seen one this way before, and I look forward to seeing more of it.
Mark McCausland posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 1:12am
Yes! this is so funny! I never fail to get a good laugh from your stories. Please keep it up!!
darthridian posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 1:09am
very interesting story so far, nice to see harry fianlly get some lessons in who he is and what he represents, nice touch with the bodyguards too.
keep up the great writing.
Bob Officer posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 1:07am
This has all the makings of a wonderful romp.
I wait the next chapter, most E A G E R L Y ![u][/u]
DJ posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 1:07am
I have long said your "bad writing" is better tnan most can write at their best. So to find this when I got home tonight made my week thanks. Keep it up.
Silo posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 1:07am
this is grat i hope u update this fast and i hope to see the rest of the harry wendsday fic to
Lee Dickie posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 1:04am
This is one of the best Triwizard Tournament stories I have ever read. Great fun, thanks.
Stahchild posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 12:51am
Fantastic beginning. I'm liking this already.
I hope all goes well for you in Real life and I'm very glad you haven't decided to give up on writing completely.
Best of luck!
dan26 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 12:49am
It'll be interesting to see who Fred and George actually pick to be harry's girlfriend?