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vasilis01 posted a comment on Monday 17th February 2014 7:57am for Chapter 1

All i can say is excellent work. I'd love to read the next chapter????

delrusant posted a comment on Monday 17th February 2014 7:02am for Chapter 1

wow you went and stayed in character the release from the slave bond was unexpected. As always an excellent piece of entertainment Thank you

xavierp posted a comment on Monday 17th February 2014 6:30am for Chapter 1

This story made me happy. Harry tricks everyone to get what he wants and still retains his principles. Of course, this could have been much darker if the Veela enclave were tricking everyone into thinking they were lovely beings.

And Snape got beheaded! Always good fun.

Glad to hear Perfect Slytherins will continue - I love the series.

thms_pn posted a comment on Monday 17th February 2014 5:51am for Chapter 1

I admit I was looking/hoping for something new from Hogwarts' Dawn or Perfect Slytherins. I noticed this one was new and just glanced at it because I was curious. Now I've read it too. And can't wait for more! lol Go ahead torture the poor readers. :D Seriously, no pressure... Just... Wow! Yeah!

selonianth posted a comment on Monday 17th February 2014 5:05am for Chapter 1

This is good. It's... a little weird that you have literally every non-human be a polite, non-assholish, person but everyone gets their unicorn in their garden.

Glad you're going to be writing again. Missed your work.

bgoldnyxnet posted a comment on Monday 17th February 2014 3:48am for Chapter 1

I was really impressed with the first part, up through the point where Harry released Fleur from her oath. To quote Ron Weasley (canon-Ron, not this story's Ron), "Brilliant!"

The second part, I'm afraid, struck me as the male equivalent of Mary Sue.

ficbob posted a comment on Monday 17th February 2014 3:16am for Chapter 1

I reread this and I realized that I did not comment on the great scenes with Hedwig

and I am not sure if I want Snape to have attacked Harry on Dumbles orders or not; I am just not sure which way will torment Dumbles more

Thanks

Looking forward to more from you

XRaiderV1 posted a comment on Monday 17th February 2014 2:44am for Chapter 1

very well done sir.

Jonathan Langford posted a comment on Monday 17th February 2014 2:34am for Chapter 1

I reallly like this. I also look forward to (hopefully) seeing all Dumbledore's machinations blow up in his face in Part 2. (I'm guessing he's behind a lot of the non-contact from Sirius and non-support from others, though I suppose that might not be the case.)

Tanaxanth posted a comment on Monday 17th February 2014 1:51am for Chapter 1

Clever and interesting.

If possible and could there also be a small part of what happens since Harry is happy and the rest of the world is probably burning? :)

Hurin posted a comment on Monday 17th February 2014 1:43am for Chapter 1

I ventured off the H/Hr reservation to read this, on a recommendation from the Seel'vor Yahoo site. Other than the unnecessary harshness to Fleur (even bitches deserve better treatment), I enjoyed it very much.

I'm looking forward to more.

moontenshi posted a comment on Monday 17th February 2014 12:51am for Chapter 1

I very much enjoyed that. I honestly believed that Harry had gone to the dark side, but you redeemed him at the end. Glad your back to a more regular updating schedule.

Mesterio posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 11:07pm for Chapter 1

This is an amazing story, I would in fact like to see a whole epic length of this, continued into his adulthood! I can imagine him growing up and then leaving the city with permission in order to find more knowledge to protect them with, becoming their Archmage or somethign along those lines. On top of that the romance possibilities are endless!

Update again soon!

-Mesterio

Bren Antrim posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 10:52pm for Chapter 1

What an interesting premise, and I really enjoyed reading it. Glad to see you writing again!

Neeliemom posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 10:51pm for Chapter 1

Wow. Just wow. This was absolutely amazing. I don't believe I've ever run across anything quite like it, and that is such a nice surprise! (I've read a lot of fanfic over the years, after a while you get used to the general themes and can figure out what will happen next.) I'm looking forward eagerly to the next chapter! It's so nice to read something from you again. Welcome back!

The Seeker posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 10:01pm for Chapter 1

Wow! I am really glad I didn't stop halfway through this chapter and leave a review. I seriously thought something hugely negative had happened in your life, and this fic was the way you were getting the poison out of your system. With the hindsight of now having read the entire chapter I can again applaud your creativity and storytelling abilities and release the huge lungful of air that I knew I was holding.

Love the thinking and forward planning Harry in this story. He played the part perfectly, as did the Veela squad that came to take Harry to their Enclave. The beheading of Snape was especially appreciated. It will be interesting to gain in the second chapter an outside perspective and different pov of what went on during Harry's isolation.

Probably the best part of the chapter was in the ending author's notes. It's great news that we'll soon have three new chapters to read and marvel at. I'm looking forwarding to next weekend's update of Enslavement as much as I am anticipating the next chapters for Hogwarts Dawn and Perfect Slytherins.

- The Seeker

WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 9:40pm for Chapter 1

This was great, it started looking like it would take a dark turn and then spun into light again. I love how Harry used everyone's expectations against them and freed himself. Snape being killed was a terrific bonus. Welcome back!

kstchr posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 9:39pm for Chapter 1

I loved your description of the Veela enclave, and I can see why being there would be such a refreshing change for Harry...no one staring at him, talking about his parents, expecting things from him, etc. I'm also glad he didn't carry through with his threat of enslavement, though his plan was a brilliant way to get "out"!!

Mementox posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 7:58pm for Chapter 1

I really like the idea. I am looking forward to POV of the others on Harry's actions. Will you also include future consequences (eg how Voldemort will react etc. )? Keep up the good work!

HopelessFan posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 7:58pm for Chapter 1

Much enjoyed, I hope everything is going well with you, and as-always, looking forward to more as you have time :-)