Mionefan posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd March 2009 8:03pm for Changes

Aww. I rather liked it. Yes, it's all that you said, but there were opportunities to change things drastically from that point on, however, your points are still valid. Still, you left the germ of an idea for someone else to perhaps work off it.

shields_ink posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd February 2009 4:36pm for Changes

Please add more soon thanks Inkheart

bsmurf posted a comment on Tuesday 20th January 2009 1:24pm for Changes

Yo whats up my names Shawn or you can call me Smurf I was wondering if i could finish this story I like it alot and have wanted to do a Harry Fleur fic for a while but get close to finishing it in my head or on paper and get stuck and im pretty sure I can do this one I already have a couple ideas running around in my head now but let me know you can email me at bsmurf2009ataol(dot)com

Thomas V. Sperl posted a comment on Sunday 14th December 2008 6:53pm for Changes

Hi...,
well I think it's kind of sad that you abandond this, but your choice.
I think i like some of the ideas (i hope you wont mind if a borrow if my own little plotbunny is making it to writing phase at all....)

mfg Tom (Thomas) Sperl

sith2886 posted a comment on Thursday 27th November 2008 8:53pm for Changes

well those cliches you wanted to avoid, they are running rampant in prongs's continuation. i wanted to see this continued, i even new the risks that would come with it, but arrghhhh! between the Molly and Ron bashing and the "oh by the way we veela are bisexual and always alphas so go ahead and make a harem" I'm surprised he hasn't made Harry an heir to the founders yet.

ching965 posted a comment on Thursday 27th November 2008 11:04am for Changes

Wonderful story. Too bad it's abandoned. Either way, keep up the great work. Hope to see more from you in the future.

skuert posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2008 2:22pm for Changes

a pitty that you abonned this one it had the potential to be better than a usual Lord potter story...

stealacandy posted a comment on Saturday 13th September 2008 10:35am for Changes

Harry sighed and slumped down on to the seat. "It happened with Voldemort," he whispered. "It forced the last four people he had killed out of the wand. Cedric, an old lady," he paused again, and finished with, "my parents."


You forgot Frank BNryce, the muggle gardener or whatnot living on the grounds of the Riddle manor house.

bsmurf posted a comment on Tuesday 12th August 2008 10:13pm for Changes

hi my name is Shawn but you can call me Smurf i was wondering if you would send me the link to the continuation of this story i came across it a few months ago but lost the link not long after (that is if the person is still writing it, if not i would like to ask your permision to continue this story where you left off) my email is bsmurf2009@aol.com hope to hear from you soon Smurf (by the way loved every fic I have had the chance to read that you have written)

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 10th August 2008 7:48pm for Changes

Personally, I like it. If you need some change to the setup I'd have suggested making Voldy and his supporters too entrenched in the magical world to be removed, so finding a gateway to elsewhere became a priority as well as evacuating all their friends and family.

Of course that's a bit character heavy, so how about limiting the size of the groups and all of them going to different places. You still get everyone saved, but you have them in manageable characters sets doing the Sliders' setup looking for a new home.

And they may decide on travel and adventure before finding a home.

Zucht posted a comment on Friday 20th June 2008 12:48pm for Changes

I must be too new to the HP fanfic's, it seemed fresh to me. And the whole absent Fluer thing ached of longing and romance. The four women bound to him was interesting and could have led to all sorts of problems as he dealt with their personal relationships inside the 'family' and out.

The story was interesting and exciting and you set the standard for us other fanfiction writers.

-ZuchtZucht413@yahoo.com

Korisovra posted a comment on Tuesday 11th March 2008 2:03am for Changes

The only one in the abandoned section I consider anywhere near worthy of being continued. But, regrettably, abandoned is abandoned.........

Prongs1977 posted a comment on Sunday 2nd March 2008 8:13pm for Changes

If it's abandoned, may I pick up the ball and run with it? I would love to see what I can do with this one, as you've already inspired me a bit on some other things. Also, how do I become an author here?

Prongs1977 posted a comment on Sunday 2nd March 2008 10:14am for Changes

Do you mind if I use this abandoned fic as "inspiration" for a story I've kind of been working on but been unable to really find a way to begin? As such, would that work if I found another abandoned fic I felt would work to jump start an idea I've been stuck on?

dc1 posted a comment on Friday 8th February 2008 3:40am for Changes

damn you write some of the best stuff to be abandoned. this has the makings of an excellent story and it's a tradgedy that it wont be completed. there's no use crying over spilt milk, so im off to read another one.

cheers
dc1

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Monday 21st January 2008 10:14am for Changes

I like the way you write the Fleur / Harry interaction but I can see why this was abandoned - it would be difficult to continue. It's a shame as it's enjoyable.

hayeth posted a comment on Friday 4th January 2008 1:19pm for Changes

I was beginning to wonder why you abandoned the fic since I thought it was pretty interesting. But after reading your reasons I understand. You did have a tendency to write magical realtionships. You also pointed out that it would come to close to being another cliche independent Harry fic.

That being said it would be nice to see you do a Harry/Fleur fic. You have a few abandoned and one-shot fics, but nothing concrete like "Hope" or any of your other stories. You have the skills and the imagination to pull off an interesting and creative story.

Speaking of cliche's though, cliche fics are not necessarily bad. What makes cliche fics bad is when cliches are used as a short cut for explaining things. For instance...

1)Harry reads more books than a normal human can in one summer. Therefore he knows all these spells.

2)Harry abuses the fuck out of a Time Turner and gets years of practice in one week.

3)Harry gets every magical power known to God.

Cliches are scapegoats. My goal as a writer is to take rusty cliches ideas and show that they can still be used to make a good story. Oh well, 2008 has started and I look forward to your future works.

Kenjit posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2007 6:55pm for Changes

I really like this one and im kinda of sad that its abandoned but your the author and its your choice. If you ever start it up again just know youll receive my thanks in your commments

Immortalitis posted a comment on Saturday 1st December 2007 5:51pm for Changes

Lovely story.

I really wish you'd do a Harry/ Fleur GoF fic, since you clearly have an aptitude for emulating the Veela mind.

finally_sso posted a comment on Monday 12th November 2007 1:15pm for Changes

I like this one you have to finish it please.