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Lucinda posted a comment on Tuesday 27th September 2005 9:14am for All Night Long

While I admit, I'd never considered Cho and her husband as a pairing, it actually works. I do like the consideration you've shown to cultural and pure-blood bias, even if I find such biases often-unfriendly and illlogical, because they are part of the world. By showing that you paint a more detailed picture of the world, warts and all.

Quite the interesting/ugly/awkward dillema for Cho, and I like the application of muggle science as a solution.

Lucinda

John posted a comment on Wednesday 7th September 2005 10:11pm for All Night Long

Exceptionally well writen with a story line that would put Rowling in her place.

James posted a comment on Thursday 25th August 2005 6:12am for All Night Long

How did you write that title and NOT include a single line from the song? I wouldn't have thought it possible, especially after reading the opening. Using it as Cho's chat-up line would have been funny. Are you the one what's your sign can I take ya home?

Cracking story anyway; I can see that pairing and Draco's ignorance was very well done.

Jared posted a comment on Wednesday 24th August 2005 1:58am for All Night Long

Well Fuck. Interesting story you have here. Nicely done, just like all the others. However, for some reason, it creeped me out. Just doesn't seem morally right.

len vandiveer posted a comment on Tuesday 12th July 2005 11:44pm for All Night Long

Very angsty, I hope the american doctors don't tell Draco & Cho about the chances for multiple births. ROFL! Nothing like Draco having 5 or 6 red-haired/green-eyed kids running all over.
Of course that will be a surprise you can add in a future chapter/story. Nothing like LIlly clones everywhere.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Tuesday 12th July 2005 5:56am for All Night Long

Twisted. Nice work.

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Sunday 10th July 2005 3:35pm for All Night Long

Awesome. I liked it. Different for you. Nice work!!

Martin posted a comment on Thursday 30th June 2005 11:39pm for All Night Long

While I grant that the story was well written, I feel very... conflicted. I don't think that Cho would be so vain as to underestimate harry so much, especially since he has proven himself as such a powerful wizard. However, Cho and Draco's resoning seems very practical considering their heritage and school house. I congradulate you, Jeconais, on writing such a superb piece.

Tom posted a comment on Thursday 30th June 2005 6:59pm for All Night Long

Very different, but I like it. I was especially entertained by Harry's deft berating of Draco and Cho at the end, as he notes their ignorance of ALL possibilities. However, when it comes to the life of a herder of animals being peaceful, well, tell that to Eumaeus. Heh...

Anyhow, I quite enjoyed it; well played, lad!

Cindy posted a comment on Thursday 30th June 2005 5:35pm for All Night Long

This was wonderfull. Please write more like it. Your description of Lucius' death and Voldemort's end was magnificent and I really believe that Harry could be sorry that he had to kill so many. The bottom line is though that this is one of the best stories of recovery that I have ever read.

Maxennce posted a comment on Tuesday 28th June 2005 11:03pm for All Night Long

Don't think that I could be the bigger man and do something like that. I've heard about donor fathers and mothers not being so detached from the children that they've donated to as they first promised. I don't know if I could be that detached. You know, its something thats come from you, its a part of you, and despite you not being there for the entire nine months of pregnancy and birthing, you still feel asthough you are missing apart of yourself, do you know what I mean. Kudos to Harry for being teh bigger man, but I don;t think I could have done it
Cheers
Max

Ben Russell-Gough posted a comment on Tuesday 28th June 2005 9:51am for All Night Long

Yeah, it was different, but it was a /good/ different. A very OOC Draco, but you can see how he would have got into this position. Cho's solution is, of course, very, /very/ Ravenclaw - all intellect and no emotion.

What did I enjoy the most? That, in the end, Draco /had/ changed totally. He wanted a child, both for political reasons and so that he could undo Lucius' sins. I think that says a lot about the man, and so does his feelings for Cho.

Harry, I strongly advise you to watch "When Harry Met Sally" - You will not be so sure about how much you impressed Cho after that. ;-)

BenRG's Rating: 8/10

K posted a comment on Tuesday 28th June 2005 9:24am for All Night Long

Decent story, I suppose. It just didn't seem to have a point really. the characters were there, they did stuff and it just sort of stopped. I know it had a conclusion, harry reached a decision, but it just seemed a little too trivial of a conclusion, at least to me.

stacey posted a comment on Tuesday 28th June 2005 7:55am for All Night Long

love it! wow i don't think that i've ever read anything with this kind of idea... but i like it! this could turn into a great stroy if you keep on going with it...

brad posted a comment on Tuesday 28th June 2005 7:01am for All Night Long

wow i hope you write a epilogue i think harry and ginny or one of the other's from the da would be a good idea and harry joining the aurors!

HermioneGreen posted a comment on Tuesday 28th June 2005 5:25am for All Night Long

Interesting fic. I like the way it ended. I look forward to anything else you have to offer.

Thanks eversomuch for the ride.

'Mione

Payne posted a comment on Monday 27th June 2005 11:54pm for All Night Long

I have to say that was a weird story, The only one I have seen with that story line.. But like all your other stories it was very well written. So thank you for posting it...But I am sitting on pins and needle's waiting for the next chapter of White Knight....(wink wink)...lol

Patches posted a comment on Monday 27th June 2005 10:21pm for All Night Long

Very different. I was a little curious when I saw a different story title on your updates page. As always you write a convincing story. This is deffinitely a different slant. I see great possiblilities for you as a writer if that is what you choose to do.
You always make the story seem plausible. I wouldn't think of Cho coming back from the past. I would have never come up with this kind of story line. I can see Harry becoming a little darker after killing Voldemort and you have brought that clearly to the front.
I can't say I like the whole concept but it really gives me more possible stories to consider. Thank you for a defferent view of "Harry Potter"!

Olafr posted a comment on Monday 27th June 2005 8:24pm for All Night Long

Wow. Not at all typical for you. I liked the handling of Harry's loneliness - it could have been the basis for a self-absorbed angst-fest but I was very glad to see you avoid that, while still making your point.

As always, very good writing - I think your sense of pacing is getting better over the years - and while this story is very much stand-alone I'm very glad I read it (and that you wrote it).

BTW, I'm really looking forward to seeing more of WK,GQ.

- Olafr.

PS: Illegitimis non carborundum. ;-)

nonjon posted a comment on Monday 27th June 2005 8:23pm for All Night Long

Hmm. That was different. The quality and richness of the characters, situations, and dialogue was as always top notch. Well written fic, but not a very pleasing one. It was much easier to not enjoy reading this until the last page or so, which did help redeem it's low likelihoood of re-readability. The situation wasn't a very pleasant one, I didn't like Cho as a person, I didn't like Draco as a person, and Harry up until that last bit had no sense of hope for the future or positive reinforcement of a potential happily ever after. Kingsley was lovely of course. The story had a kind of quality I'd compare to some really well done drama movies. You know it's good but you don't necessarily enjoy watching it or ever want to see it again. At least it had that feel until the last page. Now I'm not so sure I won't re-read this later and enjoy it more without the fear or apprehension of Cho or Draco getting the better of Harry. Hmm, I'm sounding like I have some issues there me thinks.

Anyways, as always, thank you for posting and sharing, and please continue to share your writing. It is much appreciated.