kittyperry posted a comment on Friday 9th September 2011 4:20pm

Love your story. Just a question, is there a reason why a Navy Marine would be in the UK training Harry??? Does this have some larger meaning in the story?

Freakshow13 posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd August 2011 1:52am

I've read your story a few times now and i love it just as much as the first time i read it. I would love to know where it goes from the cliffy. Even a oneshot would be welcome. And in closing just wanted to say that i think that you are a wonderful writer and cant wait to see what you come out with in the future. Thanks again Travis

omnscient0 posted a comment on Monday 18th July 2011 2:11am

I was liking this story until you got to the whole Ginny situation. Which felt really out of place and really out of character. That sort of ruined what otherwise a really good story.

cinder14767 posted a comment on Monday 4th July 2011 8:40am

i have read this story multiple times and never get tired of it my one question is what is the message they left on the painting?

reader1writer1 posted a comment on Wednesday 8th June 2011 6:23am

I really enjoyed this a lot :) I guess you could tell LOL

reader1writer1 posted a comment on Tuesday 7th June 2011 7:48pm

I got my call out of the way so i could reward myself by reading more of this. It's excellent. So much fun ...

reader1writer1 posted a comment on Tuesday 7th June 2011 5:43pm

that was so great--i may have to read some more before i call verizon or do real work ;)

reader1writer1 posted a comment on Tuesday 7th June 2011 3:19pm

This was great! :)

reader1writer1 posted a comment on Tuesday 7th June 2011 4:41am

I like how this is going. In many ways it's pretty realistic

reader1writer1 posted a comment on Tuesday 7th June 2011 2:25am

I really liked this. This Pansy handled herself well. i think i like her, too :)

sitruc1986 posted a comment on Friday 22nd April 2011 8:36pm

i think this is like the 10nth time reading this story i love it

Serph Black posted a comment on Tuesday 15th March 2011 6:19am

Masterful! A truely great work that i will enjoy for years to come!

Sweetdoggie posted a comment on Monday 7th March 2011 5:55am

Just wanted you to know I really enjoyed this story and the unusual pairing was quite refreshing. You handled the wrap-up nicely. I liked the way Bellatrix met her end, Draco too for that matter. It was a nice read. Thanks for sharing.

keichan2 posted a comment on Sunday 20th February 2011 7:44pm

This is a nice story!
I liked the initial ideas (both Pansy hiding herself -- and I now remember Lucifael doing the same in Futures Insight 01: Futures Insight -- and her family looking for Harry to make an alliance) and the way you went through the story.
There were some interesting ideas (like the Elf Council) and I did find it interesting that you made the wizarding shields stopping bullets (most authors prefer to make them either not able to, or just useful for one bullet)

And the ending was funny :-D

Thanks for sharing.

DeeZeno posted a comment on Tuesday 15th February 2011 4:57pm

I sorta want a sequel to this story... It is REALLY good!!!

nikkole posted a comment on Sunday 30th January 2011 7:22am

best story ever. It was a [u]delight[/u] to read.

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Sunday 23rd January 2011 10:19am

Pansy and Daphne really played Draco well. I love it!

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Saturday 22nd January 2011 8:53pm

I don't think Harry would have told pansy about the prophecy so quickly but other than that, very believable. Good job!

Jack Butler posted a comment on Wednesday 8th December 2010 8:12pm

Something that has always bugges the ever-living crap about this story. Jerusalem artichokes aren't "just some artichokes". The artichoke is a flower; what you are eating when you eat artichokes are leaves and petals. Jerusalem artichokes, on the other hand, are roots of the sunflower plant. They are more akin to potatoes or jicama, and have an altogether different taste and texture.

I hate when non-chefs create a "fine dining" meal that would never work in a real world restaurant.

Meg posted a comment on Thursday 2nd December 2010 5:37am

Were Pansy and Harry dancing the paso?