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WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Friday 11th November 2016 11:07pm

Nicely written. It seems like It will be a threesome, but I hope it stays a couple and Ginny as the little sister or close confidant.

Terrorpen posted a comment on Sunday 28th August 2016 6:48am

I enjoyed this story immensely. It was very well done and I congratulate you on your character depictions especially the use of Pansy as the main romantic interest of the tale since she is overall an underutilised character by most people. All in all I would recommend other people to read it and I cant wait to check out some of your other work.

Terrorpen

lolimjustherefortheHPfics posted a comment on Tuesday 21st June 2016 10:25pm

Lololololololololol "Dobby doesn't care!" XD dead

PGHammer21B posted a comment on Saturday 19th December 2015 5:51am

Okay, folks - don't faint. "Quality Street" is a real brand - I've actually seen them. (BJ's Wholesale Club - locations throughout the muggle United States. http://www.bjs.com)

PGHammer21B posted a comment on Saturday 19th December 2015 4:28am

Muggle laser surger = LASIK (Laser In-situ Keratotomy); at that time, it had started catching on in Britain, as well as the United States. It has since progressed that more near-sighted and far-sighted can take advantage of it for correction to full-range vision - the only exception are astigmatics ("lazy eye syndrome").

Wanderer posted a comment on Monday 26th October 2015 8:48pm

A solid tale with a lot of fun quirks and characters, thanks!

M

kyoshi posted a comment on Sunday 6th September 2015 5:11am

Grouch has got to be the worst name that I have ever heard. Is it pronounced you are a grouch.

Jon08 posted a comment on Thursday 3rd September 2015 2:21pm

Brilliant, from start to finish.

Jon08 posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd September 2015 3:10pm

Never read a Harry Pansy story before, but your summary jumped out at me.The only stories I've seen before with a HP/PP tag have been 'contract' stories. The opening premise behind this is so Slytherin, helping others to help themselves to the mutual benefit of all.

Looking forward to the next chapter and I'll be reading that before you read this.

Aries-Antares posted a comment on Monday 1st June 2015 5:23am

What is wrong with being 5'8? Johnny Depp is that! And Robert Downey Jr. is lower then that. Why do heroes always have to be like 6 feet?

Aries-Antares posted a comment on Monday 1st June 2015 5:07am

Uhm, explain why Tonks as an Auror just let's Dumbledore plan on kidnapping Harry?

xander-45acp posted a comment on Friday 8th May 2015 11:40am

Hi there !

Having just finished this story in pretty much one big sitting....I LOVED IT !!

I saw a reference to this story by - I THINK - TheBlackHand724 on Fanfiction.net, Master of War story if i recall correctly, but again i'm not sure.

So far this is pretty much the first Harry/Pansy story that has some length to it and really works.

I'm quite partial to Harry ending up with a Slytherin, or more over showing his Slytherin side so to speak :P

In any case, Great work ! Right now i'm about to work my way through Blue Steel and probably the rest of your fics too ^^.

I hope you'll continue to write many more stories, as I'm sure i'll enjoy them.

Loved the way you incorporated Nymphy's metamorph skills like that btw first time i've read something like that as well.

All the best,

Xander-45acp [yes i'm a bit of a gun nut, couldn't help but chuckle at Betsy ]

Noble Korhedron posted a comment on Monday 2nd March 2015 10:47am

So what was Molly on about? Is this now officially Harry/Ginny/Pansy? And what about a sequel? Any chance of one?

Mirky posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd February 2015 12:59am

wow... just wow...

I know its like 10 years (o.O) since this was written and in those 10+ years of my fanfiction reading I've never read a Pansy/Harry fic. I can say this is very well written, not too far from believable, and the fan girl in me isn't squeemish with the Het love being thrown around. <3 <3

sanbeegoldiewhitey posted a comment on Saturday 1st November 2014 7:09am

Not one of my favorites among your stories. The start was very good. You were able to give Pansy a real make over. I thought you were brilliant in transforming canon pug-faced Pansy in to a nice, beautiful witch. What ruined it for me was despite the great love between Harry and Pansy, you inserted Ginny into the relationship of Harry and Pansy. You did a great makeover of Ginny as well and became sympathetic towards her and inserted her in the relationship. I honestly thought that naming the story as Harry/Pansy was false advertising. You should label this as Harry/Pansy/Ginny.

studyofchaos posted a comment on Sunday 26th October 2014 2:45am

Great story. Thanks!

santiln posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd June 2014 7:05am

Man I usually love all your ff's but this one let me with a sour taste after finishing it. The threeway relationship got really bothersome at some point and Pansy in last chapters got really flat, you didn't even do something about the engagement. I love your stories, I really like your stories with non canon pairings but this was kind off meh at the end.

I hope you get something new for us up soon. I love Dawn...

Till the next time.

Cheers

lumusmaxima77 posted a comment on Wednesday 28th May 2014 12:46pm

Please please, tell me you'll write a sequel about Harry \pansy \Ginny, even a oneshot.... by the way,the story is one of my favorite togheter with. " that means war". thanks, they. Are a joy to read

Kara posted a comment on Monday 26th May 2014 6:24pm

The only real objection, if you could call it that, was that Bella surrendered. That should have been honored. Yes, she's a death eater. A terrorist. However she SURRENDERED. If for nothing other than the intelligence value, that should have been honored.

Arklytte posted a comment on Friday 11th April 2014 2:29am

Just finished reading this story for at least the 10th time, and I just keep falling more and more in love with it every time I read it. Your characterization is superb...Ginny and Pansy are both fully developed characters by the end and are very believable. Your plots and sub-plots are interesting and keep me invested in the story, and overall I really love what you've done with the HP universe.

All that being said, I do have two small complaints. Well...one complaint/criticism and one error that I just feel compelled to point out. The criticism is this: The half of the story, especially the last two chapters, felt *incredibly* rushed. For the first half of the story it seems like you took plenty of time to develop the characters and highlight their interactions, but for the last part it was just like *hurry-hurry-hurry-and-get-to-the-end*. Now I dont know if you were just tired of writing it or your muse decided to take a bit of a break, but the rushed feeling is pretty much the only major criticism I have of the otherwise thoroughly excellent story.

The error, and I dont know if it's already been pointed out to you before...I searched the comments but couldn't find any other reference...anyway...it's a small thing, but every time I read it, it totally throws me out of my suspension of disbelief and it's really jarring. The end battle, where you have the two Apache attack choppers carrying the Black Watch, who then fast rope down...unfortunately, Apache's dont carry troops. They are dedicated attack choppers and AFA I (and Wikipedia, and the ArmyTech website, and others) know, there is no room on them for troops. There aren't even skids for them to stand on and be shuttled into the fight. I know that, over the course of a couple hundred thousand words of story it's just a little thing, but it still bugs the crap out of me. :) I know that it's not something that you can really go back and change, but going forward, it's one of those 'do the research' things that help keep your readers immersed. :)

Again, overall, I love this story and it's the only Harry/Pansy story I've ever found that I truly enjoyed (a few others have come close, but they're either Harem!Harry or Harry with Pansy and at least one other girl). Keep doing what you do...I love your work.

Ark