gtgrouch posted a comment on Saturday 25th May 2013 12:35am
Wow - all of this and Remus for Minister, too?
gtgrouch posted a comment on Friday 24th May 2013 9:46pm
Aha - the 'rebuilding Harry' phase. Next is either training for Harry, manipulating the situation, or both. Still a good story. I appreciate how you portray conversations and people's interaction.
Looking forward to more!
gtgrouch posted a comment on Friday 24th May 2013 6:59pm
Interesting . . . Voldemort has to go, because he is bad for business.
Nice original twist on Pansy Parkinson with the glamour spells!
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
bearblue posted a comment on Tuesday 21st May 2013 7:12am
I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for sharing. :)
sanbeegoldiewhitey posted a comment on Saturday 2nd February 2013 7:30am
Great first date. And Harry is Bruce Lee.
sanbeegoldiewhitey posted a comment on Saturday 2nd February 2013 6:20am
Amazing. You made me like Pansy.
sanbeegoldiewhitey posted a comment on Saturday 2nd February 2013 5:37am
Brilliant ploy. Pansy was hiding her looks.
Nytefyre posted a comment on Monday 21st January 2013 6:08am
I read this a while back and didn't get a chance to post how much I liked this story. Well written and plotted, and utilizing a diverse cast in a unique way that flowed organically from point to point as it built.
Bravo, and thanks for posting.
AragornII posted a comment on Monday 31st December 2012 5:28pm
Have been a big fan of your other HP stories...but balked at the Pansy pairing. Finally saw a glowing reference on someone's 10 Best HP Stories. Congratulations on your wonderful transmutation of her.
Especially love your use of Ginny in this story. Very well done, indeed!
AragornII posted a comment on Friday 28th December 2012 1:56am
What a great chapter! One of the best in HP fanfiction. Particularly like the whole Pansy/Ginny/Daphne interactions.
JShade posted a comment on Tuesday 6th November 2012 5:54am
By far the most intense grey Harry I've ever read, and easily the best Harry/Pansy pairing, althugh I'm not too well-read on that pairing. Literally could not stop reading and it was worth all the work I now have to catch up on. Seriousy, I know its an older story but its still awesome, if a tad unrealistic at some points.
Araytigre posted a comment on Friday 26th October 2012 6:36am
Soul Bonded, little did they realize, that when they shared Nott's magic (and Riddle's only re-enforced it) they bound their souls together. So, rather than they were a "Couple", now they are a "Trio", and somehow I don't think that it will be a problem for any of them. This was a brilliant story, very engaging, lots of action, with a dash of romance thrown in on the side. Harry and Pansy's love for each other may be complete, but they have found a place in their hearts for Ginny, and I can see a possibility for letting Hermione and maybe even Daphne in too, who knows, it could happen under the right circumstances. Thank You. TTFN
wileycoyote posted a comment on Monday 24th September 2012 5:35am
Awesome! Just really awesome.
gara5289 posted a comment on Saturday 28th July 2012 9:38pm
Honestly, there should be more stories involving Dobby kicking ass. And I'm still waiting for a story where Dobby tosses Voldemort around like a toy.
ILikeToRead posted a comment on Tuesday 7th February 2012 6:18pm
Great story and well worth reading. I like how well Pansy worked out along with her family to support Harry into making him what he needed to be to win a war. Thanks for sharing!
Pennywise posted a comment on Wednesday 1st February 2012 2:45pm
Awesome story, someone from Fanfiction recommended this story while writting something and I'm glad I searched for it on google.
Ka-ris posted a comment on Thursday 5th January 2012 7:18pm
not too sure about the fight scene, but otherwise a great chapter. Kids being kids even if they are in combat training.this is waht most fan-fics miss, letting the charatcrs BE teenagers
AbnormalPanda_242 posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd January 2012 10:41am
I am a very big fan of a lot of your work, first having been introduced to it through 'Hope' - which I originally read in French through FanFiction.Net. Wish I'd found this website earlier. Translation sucks.
'White Knight, Grey Queen' is one of the best pieces of fanfiction I have ever read, rated right up there with... wait... a lot of your other work, including 'Happily Ever After', 'Hope' and 'This Means War'.
I was particularly impressed with the way that you made Pansy likeable, though she was slightly too creepily cold for me. I loved your Ginny, though, and your Malcolm and Gruoch. I even liked the way you had Molly-the-prankster (which I've always believed in, myself) and slightly-mature-Ron. Remus is a great Minister for Magic - I've never seen that before - and I loved the description of Tonks in battle mode. ("My Lord!" "Nott?" "A spy!" "Where?" "Right here!")
One of the only things that I disliked about this was the coldness that became a part of Harry. I can see how it would be neccessary, though, and inevitable after a long period spent with a small amount of people for the sake of learning how to kill people.
That said - thank you for simply being around! You're a great point to bring up when a certain friend of mine is particularly sceptical about the quality of fanfiction.
Maybe you will do another epic-length piece, again? I do love them, though attempts to write them myself have failed. Miserably. Oneshots are all that I seem to have commitment enough to stick with.
Well, back to real books I suppose ;)
GinnyLover posted a comment on Wednesday 16th November 2011 6:43pm
There is a lot of loose ends you need to tie up. Plz write another chapter.
HellWolf666 posted a comment on Friday 21st October 2011 2:27am
wright more harry/pansy and harry/hermione plz i love ur fanfics