White Knight, Grey Queen

A thoroughly enjoyable tale. I like how you engineered a super-trained!Harry without falling into the ridiculous cliche that are floating about out there. Your characterization was as wonderful as ever. Your chapter lengths were far from standardized, but I only point this out to show that you are, indeed, human.

Thanks for the great story.

A thoroughly enjoyable tale. I like how you engineered a super-trained!Harry without falling into the ridiculous cliche that are floating about out there. Your characterization was as wonderful as ever. Your chapter lengths were far from standardized, but I only point this out to show that you are, indeed, human.

Thanks for the great story.

YOu are such a great writer. I just read this story from start to finish today, and loved it. I actually have enjoyed your stories much more then JKR's. Thanks!

AAAAMmmmaaaazzzzing story!!!!!

This is a really good story, but I admit I would like to see one more chapter to see how Harry, Pansy and Ginny deal with their issue.

This is a really good story, but I admit I would like to see one more chapter to see how Harry, Pansy and Ginny deal with their issue.

very nice.

Great story, this is the third time I have read it and it is one of the best,

gunny

i love this story. i really would like to seea sequel to know how everything will turn out in the end. idk if you still run this site or not, so i won't hold my breath. I will read this story again someday.


Jone-Z

Just revisiting one of my favorite stories. I hope circumstances will permit you to update some of the current ones. Thanks for writing. W.

This is very well written. The biggest issue I see is that there were few bumps along the way. After all, sometimes even the best laid plans do not work quite as expected. Additionally, Harry's initial acceptance of Pansy's family and herself seemed a little easy, given the his background. Finally, Pansy's acceptance of Ginny to that extent seems a little hard to believe. Oh, I'm not saying that the ending would change, but a little more resistance on Pansy's part might have been in character.

Again, overall this is quite well done. Thanks for sharing it.

wow, gtreat story

Amazing piece...It's also the first time I've ever read such a bad-ass Tonks. Wonderful.

Maybe your best piece of writing (but I have not yet read everything). Did you post any of the short side stories?


A really well thought AU story which might be a bit too hard on the Malfoy stupidity but gives an idea of what could have been HP in a less manichean setting.

Alright. I loved it! Awesome story. Where are the promised sequels?

Also, on an editorial note, many, many of your adjectives were in the wrong tense. I think that may be something that a grammar checker will catch.

Overall, I love this story! Thanks!!!

Gah.. you know, I may have liked this story if you hadn't committed one of the biggest (in my opinion) sins of fanfiction. I'll state the bottom line very simply.

This was not a Harry/Pansy story. It was a Harry/OC-with-the-name-Pansy-Parkinson story. The reason for this is because you committed that sin I was talking about. This was clearly a case of deciding who Harry was going to be paired with before outlining the story. You can't do that. Pansy is a canon character with an established personality, you can't just change her entire character for the sake of giving Harry a pretext of being with her. I mean, Christ, if you wanted Harry to be with someone of this personality, then give him someone who's NOT PANSY PARKISON. Or if you needed a Slytherin, there's always Daphne or Tracy, perfectly acceptable girls who don't have of an established personality or backstory so you could have done this exact story with them without completely disregarding everything that's been written about them.

Don't make change an established character into an OC of the same name. It's just WRONG.

Other than that, fine story. What I've come to expect from you. Despised how you had Ginny become part of their relationship like that.. but I can deal.

Cheers.

So how soon are we goin to find out about Harry, Ginny, and Pansy's "issues"? Which when you really think about it aren't really issues. Simply because they have all the grounding or a relationship anyway. I mean they've been sleeping in the same bed for months. Granted nothing sexual happened the thought and want are there. So I'm intrigued as to where you're gonna go with the sequel to this story. For some reason all fanfic authors have been hesitant to write a story of Harry's life after Voldemort now that the last book has come out and most aren't liking the ending. Don't get me wrong that and book 6 are actually the ones I haven't read(mostly cause life is gettin in the way...pesky bills). But I have the utmost respect for your particular brand of artistic talent. You take the most unlikely character and develop her into someone not only worthy of Harry but completely believable. I question your mindset and knowledge of weaponry. But I really want you to continue this line of fiction. That said(and very politely for once) I kindly request that you either start or post the sequel to White Knight, Grey Queen.

First of all, may I say that I truly enjoy reading all of your fanfiction. This is the second time I've had the honor of reading WKGQ, and it's just as addicting as when I first read it through.

Now. WHY DID YOU CUT THE STORY RIGHT BEFORE THE HARRY/PANSY/GINNY THREE-WAY?!?!?! Crikey, man, I was just looking forward to it! :P Of course, your foursome kissing Harry was just...*sigh/drool* Very entertaining to say the least. XD

Thanks for the laughs, and the tears, and the bucket of awe-inspired drool in front of my computer. You owe me for the paper towels, I'm afraid. XD

Gina (who'd still LOVE to be a part of FFA if a spot opens up in the future ;D)

Dude this book rocks and is way beyond my expectations. u rock man. now i have a small favour to ask of u-as i like this bookplease notify me as of any new books u write on these kind of plots where harry is offered training to be the best by witches and with a little romance. get me onthe email id: vamsikrishna00@gmail.com

Great Story, it is rare to find any decent size story with this pairing. You are hinting at a continuation of this story at some point, but i noticed you finished this story close to 4 years ago.

Do you have any idea on when or if at all, you'll continue this ?