Interesting and fun start... I like people drawing their own conclusions based on observed actions... and Molly punching Snape is priceless.
Thanks for posting!
Wandering about the place, decided to read this again. Ever consider doing a little recycling? Molly flattens Snape is SUCH a nice scene... :)
there is a penseive memory that Molly could definitely refill the Weasley family coffers by selling tickets to view it.
Oh, I know it's abandoned, but such fun!
i know you put this in the abandon section but i would love to see at least one more chappy. to show snapes reaction to getting punched. the reaction of the weasleys if molly showed the memory. and tom's that he lost another of his death eaters to harry.
oh yeah and fudges when they kick him out.
Once again a good start to a fic or maybe a chapter that could be added to one being written. As always a pleasure to read.
Even though you abandoned the story, I wanted to say that I've enjoyed reading it.
Of course its not a work of art: self-pitying harry is quite overdone (in fanfic world), and the conversation with mr. and mrs. seem "unnatural" to me; however, I like the idea of Harry reacting to a situation in a way that makes the wizaring world realised that fudge and the prophet might be wrong (not like he did in the trial in book5).
Hmmm... I'd pay money to see that as well!
There is no such thing as an abandoned fic, merely interupted ideas. I look forward to your niggles...
your right this did develope a plot real quick. if i had enough imagination i could finish it but i have 4 stories i am working on and can't seem to finish them. this was as well written as the one you did with harry hermione. well done and keep it up
Too bad you abandoned this. It seems like it could develop into a fun little romance fic.
He he he he...Molly hit Snivilus!
aw. that's so cute. some pretty decent fluff. you really think it's not worth continuing? too bad, it was, as i said, kinda cute, and the plot wasn't necessarily that bad, there are tons of things you could do with it! honest! voldemort's reaction to this could be interesting.
ok, sorry. i'm just sad that i didn't get any harry/ginny...i'm helplessly addicted to ships. so sue me.
Now that was a lot of fun to read. All in all thogh that is not such a bad place to leave it.
Great story Jeconais!
I won't insult your fabulous writing ability by asking to continue this fic, but I will ask that you find someone that can write as well as you do to continue this.
I think this is okay as a one-shot. Just label it so and no one will question if it's one or not.
Another very nice story, which stands well on its own.
Thanks for sharing it.
I liked it. I think you should do one more chapter, and just give the details of the birthday party and Harry and Ginny getting together. Not only would it be an awesome party to read about, you could just leave it at that, because you're right, the plot probably wouldn't be good enough to follow through on. Just a suggestion on the party scene thing, I think it would be awesome. I really liked the story anyways, abandoned or not!
Now why did you have to go and trash this? I thought it was great.
But then I like anything that has snape getting belted in the mouth.
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