This Means War
By Jeconais
Dear lord, I love this almost more than the books... and I've re-read it almost as many times as well. This is one of the best, most believable, most well-developed, and most HILARIOUS fanfictions I've EVER read - and I have read A LOT. In this one, there are only the very slight, occasional grammar errors (unlike some fics I've read), witticisms that made me literally laugh out loud, and an intricately constructed and completely thought out plot line - not to mention the passionate romance combined with your devastating cliff-hangers that kept me reading until I was finished with the whole story (at around five a.m. on a weekday). I have no regrets. Thank you so, so much for creating this beautifully constructed fanfiction masterpiece, making the characters so danged funny, and just for writing such an utterly lovely story.
Another cliff hanger...but of course Voldemort doesn't know what he and his "family" aren't exactly on the best of terms. Some great action.
The games were awesome!!!
This is my second time reading and I only noticed one clue and it was a stretch.
Maybe I have the timeframe wrong, but in this chapter as H&G are heading to breakfast, Harry note:
"She appeared a few minutes later, her robes undone, showing her school uniform. " Now, first of all, if I was into canon, I would say that it was movie pollution that made you write about a
uniform.
However, in the next chapter you have Ginny taking off her school robes and Harry noting that she, too, did not wear her school uniform. I missed the scene where she changes clothes between breakfast
and Minnie's class.
Well, I finally found the clue about the spy! I've read this story a few times, and the clue was clear: in the message Bellatrix sends Snape about why she wants to change sides, she complains that Voldemort, whenever he wants something, he turns to Lucius Malfoy and Peter Pettigrew!!! She didn't say anything about doing it in the past, but rather in the present!
You're... you're joking, right? A 40k+ chapter with a CLIFFHANGER!? Are you trying to kill me? :(
Good stuff. Sometimes a little sappy, and the whole "super Harry" has never sat well with me, but still good reading material. :)
It is as long as 'harry potter 1' i would say XDD
Great chapter, vary funny ! Loved everthing about it (:
Defenatly the best chapter yet !
just a small correction that i noticed.
in this chapter it says that ginny " appeared a few minutes later, her robes undone, showing her school uniform."
but in the next chapter it says that he noticed she had chosen not to wear the unifrm as well.
It's always fun, and it's always funny. It's a bonus when it can actually tell a story, too. Good stuff.
Yay! I'm on to re-read WK GQ see you there!
"I promise that there will not be another massive wait for the final part, because I need to have this story finished before HBP arrives.:
I assume you were referring to the movie?
Very good story. Bummer at the end. Time for some payback.
gunny
We are all eagerly awaiting the Chapter 10 to be posted so pleaes, please, please put it up :-)
I like this story and I can't wait for the next chapter. I also think that you should finish the story called The Darkness I like to know how it ends.
I was really gald to hear that you have the next 'chapter' written, I am looking forward to reading it. Please update as soon as you can, I am really looking forward to it.
PLEASE FINISH THIS!!! IT'S BEEN THREE OR FOUR YEARS!!! PLEA-HEE-HEASE FINISH IT!!!!!
I applaud your story's incredible awesomeness!!!
this is so far an outstanding plus story. I am curious of how things will go i expect more action in the next chapter thought i have to quit reading it for now because the next chapter isn't out yet.
This is a fantastic fic - excellent writing style and plot, with interesting characters. Please update soon.
How about instead From: The Wizarding World's MODEST saviour reason being that he realizes he has to save them but he isn't being arrogant or overcondfident about it