This Means War
By Jeconais
great chapter. luv this tale
Hey! Did someone tell you that you are really good!
I love the benevolent Harry, always willing to help out anyone, any time...
I loved the song, it was good, very origial. I absolutely loved it, as always. I know, my reviews are boring, but always complmentary!
Good stuff.
gunny
the cliffys are always good when subtle. this was defenatly a good one. i thought i would point out that my machine needed restarted before i could go on to the next chapter and my family was on line so i could not read the next chapter until later. even with reading it before it was still a nag to have to wait. oh and i found a mistake to insted of too, i'm a terible editer so when i find one it's shear luck so even more so with this author, and bata
The Weasley boys are so funny. Pansy had better think twice about setting Harry up like that – I don’t think he’d be so magnanimous in his revenge against a non-family member. “Working for the downfall of the Dark Tosser for fifteen years” was a brilliant change. I loved it. Tommy boy was also genius. Ooh, ow, poor Harry!
Severus Officially Gets A Clue, and smacks down Minerva in the process (concerning Harry). Harry is growing both as a person, and magically, with an ease that is plain and simply *frightening*. He's getting just as powerful using wandless magic as he is using a wand (if anything, he is elevating wandless magic to an art form). The Mmails are flying fast and furious between all parties. Pansy talks Marietta into trying to set Cho after Harry again, and Bellatrix wants out of the Death Eaters (you DID read that right; in fact, she sent several Mmails to Severus on the subject and wants him to bend Harry's ear). Harry and Aberforth talk to Fred and George about kickstarting Honest Abe's Original Butterbeer and create Original Butterbeer plc (A Brit Master Limited Partnership with a 30/30/30/5/5 split with Fred, George, Aberforth Dumbledore, Harry, and Ginny). Abe also becomes a consultant to WWW.
ok, you must have the most awesome betas alive because there are so few mistakes in your fanfic. i really don't like to nit-pick, and i normally don't catch little mistakes b/c i'm too caught up
in the story...but i'm REreading this amazing fanfic and i caught this word...and i figured i'd alert you. normality, i'm pretty certain is not a word. i believe the correct word is 'normalcy'
hoping that you update this amazing story, and soon..."Bertram Wilberforce Wooster"
Really good stuff. So enjoying this.
gunny
what a cliffhanger!