This Means War
By Jeconais
I first found it on Fanfiction.net and then when I found your personal website link, I followed it over here and finished the story.
Ever since, I come back and re-read it just to experience the excellent story once again. (I think I have re-read it 3 or 4 times now)
Yes, there are parts that don't make sense. Yes there are parts that could be better. But, overall the story is an amazing piece of writing and I am glad that you wrote and finished it.
Thank you very much!
Rachel
I first found it on Fanfiction.net and then when I found your personal website link, I followed it over here and finished the story.
Ever since, I come back and re-read it just to experience the excellent story once again. (I think I have re-read it 3 or 4 times now)
Yes, there are parts that don't make sense. Yes there are parts that could be better. But, overall the story is an amazing piece of writing and I am glad that you wrote and finished it.
Thank you very much!
Rachel
I first found it on Fanfiction.net and then when I found your personal website link, I followed it over here and finished the story.
Ever since, I come back and re-read it just to experience the excellent story once again. (I think I have re-read it 3 or 4 times now)
Yes, there are parts that don't make sense. Yes there are parts that could be better. But, overall the story is an amazing piece of writing and I am glad that you wrote and finished it.
Thank you very much!
Rachel
I first found it on Fanfiction.net and then when I found your personal website link, I followed it over here and finished the story.
Ever since, I come back and re-read it just to experience the excellent story once again. (I think I have re-read it 3 or 4 times now)
Yes, there are parts that don't make sense. Yes there are parts that could be better. But, overall the story is an amazing piece of writing and I am glad that you wrote and finished it.
Thank you very much!
Rachel
I was a bit worried about Neville, but you gave that closure. Also, by putting Bellatrix's magic in Snape's control, you neutralised her anyway. As for Narcissa...cool!
I never had any use for Pansy Parkinson--she's a simpering idiot.
I must confess that I did work out the puzzle in Hermione's M-mail concerning "outing" Draco, even though I had no doubt that you'd reveal it later. I love Cryptograms and even play them on my iPhone. The first words I solved were easy: Draco, Ginny. After that, it was a lark.
Bravo!
James
You should write an offshoot of this story, where Harry, Fred, Geroge, Lavender, Parvati, and Blaise have a Dragons Den type thing. It would be funny...
Once again something you have written, which you are then complaining about, inspires and delights. I began reading fan fiction almost 3 years ago now and it was reading things like this that made me feel like I should give something back and write something myself. This is, I believe, the fourth time I have read this fic and honestly it is still as good as the first time I read it. I look forward to any future updates on any of your fics and wish you good luck and happy writing (especially with NaNo WriMo in a few days).
Great story. But now I can't get the image of Neville and a bunch of kids running towards messed up ladies (how I see banshees) with a bunch of screaming babies in picnic baskets out of my head. Thank you. Could be because its 5.30 am and I have classes early tomorrow...
Excellent story......
Specially loved the Mmails....
Thanks & Cheers!!!
Fully agree with your note about the very different styles and tones that your writing took on from chapter to chapter. That said, each facet in turn was used well. I'm quite partial to the scenes
wih dragons as they remind me a lot of Anne McCaffrey's Dragonriders of Pern. Great piece and I hope you don't mind me comparing you to some of the best fantasy fiction I've ever read! Its sad that
you won't be doing more H/G (sorry heavily biased) but I can see where you're coming from.
I'd also like to say you got some hilarious art for this story and I hope you don't mind if I borrow those for Facebook or somesuch. Are they yours? Would like to give proper credit. Great work and I
really enjoyed your story!
Loads of fun on the firsts chapters, a bit less humoristic at the end and still an overpowerfull Harry, but really pleasant to read.
To know that you and your assistants spent years writing a story that I read non-stop in two days is incredible. Tight plot, no loose ends, well developed characters, very delightful ending, and
few typo's makes for a classic. Thank you!!!
it was WONDERFUL
I didn't enjoy a fic so much in years, this is the best fic I ever read, and I think never will!
This was adventurist, interesting and wonderful...
And as a quote of Ginny:
Thank you! Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you!
Thank you.
nice i hope to see an update to the other fics u have
Okay, sorry, I am aware that I am very enthusiastic and probably too overwhelming. (and there's no need to worry, i don't swing that way)
Seriously, I loved this fic. I didn't read it for a while at first, because from your summary it sounded a bit like Ginny was going on the rebound or something, but my low expectations were raised about three paragraphs in. This story had everything in it! It's all too often that I look at a fic and think that if only it had more action/relationships/allies/complications... and then I find everything in here. You even managed to add a couple of pairings to my list I'd never encountered before - although I doubt intentionally - Harry/Narcissa and Bellatrix/Severus. *I shamelessly ship anything that has the potential to be hot* And, looking at Bella in the fifth movie, tell me she's not hot. So, thankyou for writing an amazing story.
Even though it did make me stay up 'til one thirty in the morning.
*excessive hugs*
Ruth =)