This Means War
By Jeconais
Okay, two things. One- Harry knew how to cook from living with the Dursleys. Two- How the heck did Greyback made himself change?
Well, I started reading this fic over at fanfiction .com, and was quite disappointed to see that it didn't continue over there. Oh well, no harm, I'm back and reading again!
- Aphid Attraction
Loved it. Glad the revelation from Ginny didn't cause a fall out with Harry. Interesting having the muggles in Hogwarts.
Brilliant chapter! I loved it! There was another reference I think that I read, but I don't remember what it was. It just made me laugh though.
Ruddy brilliant man ... anya's idea was good but you took it to another level ...
Got a COMPLAINT though.. It happens that i found this story on phoenixsong and read it there ... I waited and waited for the final part only to be disappointed ... Its just pure luck that
caused me to stumble upon your site ... Please upload the last part of the story on to phoenixsong also ... there are lots of people out there who are waiting for it to be uploaded ...Dont disappoint
your fans by leaving them in limbo like this ...
I love it as always. although as I read it I can't help but feel like i've started reading halfway through.Several times you elude to what happened to Sirius and how he survived. Is there a prequel to this story perhaps? I would love to read his story.
I love your story. I started it over
at Phoenixsong but it was incomplete
there. I have been reading for 2 days and I can't wait to finish it!
You know, I never fail to cry from the beauty of the teddy bear healing.
Thank you for being such a wonderfully evocative writer.
I was just wondering, now that you've 'finished' the story....you never added in the Sadie Hawkins dance, maybe that could be an epilouge, as I am looking forward to seeing Ginny's dress and weather Blaise/Luna won the emphasising contest
I was just wondering, now that you've 'finished' the story....you never added in the Sadie Hawkins dance, maybe that could be an epilouge, as I am looking forward to seeing Ginny's dress and weather Blaise/Luna won the emphasising contest
“Them is being Dursleys,” he pointed out, staring at the two one the floor.
The two on the floor, yes?
From Chapter 9:
He ran his fingers through his hair, and walked back down to the common room, waiting for Ginny.
She[Ginny] appeared a few minutes later, her robes undone, showing her school uniform.
From this Chapter (10a):
... “I love you,” she[Ginny] whispered, and released him. She took off her robes, showing that she, too, had decided not to wear the school uniform.
As you can see, I found a continuity error. I only spotted it when I found the time to read chapters 9 and 10a back-to-back.
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heyman when r u going to load up the second part the susspence is killing me btw i loved this chapter kept me on the edge of my seat through most of it
LOVE it!!!!!!
Though, I have been wondering -- in your world, whatever happend to the Umbitch? It seems like many of the loose ends from year 5 were addressed but not that one. Just curious!
I am really looking forward to parts B and C... and anything beyond that as well!
I never get tiared of reading this. please post the next part soon.
That was quite amazing. I loved the whole thing, and the teddy bear thing was SO cute. I seem to have a lapse in knowledege, which is either me being forgetful or missing a few chapters, I'm going to go back and make sure I've read everything. I'm hoping your site didn't alert me and I'm about to find out there's more chapters to White Knight, Grey Queen. Anyway, update soon please, it's too good to be without.
He hadn’t had a bad day like this in years. Not since Lucius had hired him to run the Butterbeer plant. It was a licence to mint money, and he’d been raking it in. He’d even been honest, for a change, and not skimmed off the top. Admittedly, Lucius had pointed out that the Dark Lord disliked people who tried to defraud him, and tended to deal with it personally. Being cursed to death wasn’t high on his list of things to do.
He’d been a little surprised when his main door had been blown open; it was one of the downsides of the silencing charms that were all over the building. Making Butterbeer on an industrial scale was a very loud and smelly business.
“Mr Crys?” his contact, Matthew Viridian
Interesting way of think of your possible friends