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alec_potter posted a comment on Thursday 2nd September 2010 6:43pm for The banishment of Uzumaki Naruto

Nice crack fic..

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Thursday 2nd September 2010 6:34pm for The banishment of Uzumaki Naruto

Yeah, that's pretty crackish. But fun. :-)

darthme1011 posted a comment on Thursday 2nd September 2010 6:06pm for The banishment of Uzumaki Naruto

Hilarious story

Ronnie McMains posted a comment on Thursday 2nd September 2010 5:58pm for The banishment of Uzumaki Naruto

I'm sure if they ask nicely, Naruto would chip in Tsunade's and Anko's fines; he can afford it now. :) Tsume's probably still on her own, though; she'll just have to take it out of Kiba's allowance. :D

As for the who'll win Naruto contest, maybe Tsunade needs to enact some Clan Restoration laws (you know the ones; the oh-my-you're-the-last-of-your-clan-here's-a-harem-go-make-some-babies type of laws). That way she can get him together with Ayame and Shizune immediately (though she might have to allow Hinata her shot too).

As for the rest of the story, loved it, of course. It's a lot funnier and longer than the last one I read with this premise. That one (I forget the title at the moment), went something like this:

Council: We want you to banish the demon.
Tsunade: The hell you say?
Council: Banish Uzumaki, or we'll go over your head.
Tsunade: No.
Council: We'll go to the Daimyo, and he'll do it.
Tsunade: Did you forget who I am?
Council: Huh?
Tsunade: (punches councilmembers through wall) I'm the Hokage! I run this village, not you. Next?

Great to see you writing again, but I wonder where my story alerts are going. Catch you later!

William Fowler posted a comment on Thursday 2nd September 2010 3:36pm for The banishment of Uzumaki Naruto

Wonderful!
I loved this, I'm a huge Naruto fan, so obviously I thought this crackfic was hilarious, and the thought that this was all a setup made it even more so.

Thanks for the upload,
William

iamjmph01 posted a comment on Thursday 2nd September 2010 3:08pm for The banishment of Uzumaki Naruto

thanks for taking the time to write. I love all of your most recent stories... Ive read most of your older ones so many times i need to wait awhile before i read them more. This story was excellent i enjoyed the idea. I like the idea of the ninja... reminding... the civilians that they only have the power that the Ninja allow them to have.

again, thank you for writing, and i cant wait for more new things from you.

neqs posted a comment on Thursday 2nd September 2010 2:57pm for The banishment of Uzumaki Naruto

Heh, that was fun! Trained killers giving civilians that much power over them never made sense to either. Nice work!

Jamey posted a comment on Thursday 2nd September 2010 2:56pm for The banishment of Uzumaki Naruto

Oooh! Sooo excellent! And two updates in one week! Thank you thank you thank you!

I don't quite know how you do it, but you manage to make even the most crack-tastic things seem so reasonable!

Orion posted a comment on Thursday 2nd September 2010 2:52pm for The banishment of Uzumaki Naruto

Great! It's always very satisfying to see things like this happen to the council. Thanks for writing.

bajab posted a comment on Thursday 2nd September 2010 2:45pm for The banishment of Uzumaki Naruto

Great fun. Well done.

Neil Glover posted a comment on Thursday 2nd September 2010 2:27pm for The banishment of Uzumaki Naruto

Brilliant story, though I do think that you over priced the life of the civilian council members.

joeBob posted a comment on Thursday 2nd September 2010 2:26pm for The banishment of Uzumaki Naruto

"It was only the demon" == "Kill me now" == classic gag; LOL!

The "youthful" caricature was a tad overdone, though.

Nicely amusing story at first blush.

Of course, the underlying premise is chilling. Military dictatorships are uniformly nightmarish dystopias, and this scene could very easily be a close reenactment of one of Saddam Hussein's or Uncle Joe Stalin's soirees.

The times it wasn't a complete disaster were all under the old Roman system and can be counted on one hand. The leaders are legend to this day (or at least decent city names).

Sardor posted a comment on Thursday 2nd September 2010 2:26pm for The banishment of Uzumaki Naruto

Bwahaha, I loved it, that's the way to handle the council, brilliant!!!

Chris1 posted a comment on Thursday 2nd September 2010 1:50pm for The banishment of Uzumaki Naruto

Go Tsunade! :D

I loved Gai's speech. Brilliant part.

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Thursday 2nd September 2010 1:42pm for The banishment of Uzumaki Naruto

A great fun story but it is strangely familiar in the dealings with the council.

hordac85 posted a comment on Thursday 2nd September 2010 1:37pm for The banishment of Uzumaki Naruto

I don't know how to comment on this. Except that its GOOD!!!!!!!

David151 posted a comment on Thursday 2nd September 2010 1:37pm for The banishment of Uzumaki Naruto

nice better then anything I can wright anyway

eddiecurrent posted a comment on Thursday 2nd September 2010 1:30pm for The banishment of Uzumaki Naruto

... damn it, Jeconais, I was drinking!