The banishment of Uzumaki Naruto
A funny and fluffy little story.
I liked how most of Konoha's problems are solved in a few simple moves.
there needs to be more chapters this seems very intereestiing and it still follows tsunades passion for gambling so i say CONTINUE PLEASE
Oh god, I want this to be an AMV so bad!
Very funny crack fic. I just wish it were longer!
Extremely funny. It seems just like Tsunade to be so sneaky. She seems like one of those old women who plot for grandchildrn so Naruto's nickname of "Baa-chan" suits her. I like it.
Awesome! I looooved it!
laughing my but off
Kind of wished this story would continue because its not only a brillant crack fic but would make an interesting story as well
I laughed quite a bit while reading this fic. I love it, there's really nothing else to say.
I would love to see the reactions to what Naruto told them and Anko's hitting on Lee.
Can we entice you into making a sequel for this? Because I really like to see how the conversation between Tsunade, Ayame and Shizune goes :D
Tsunade's likely to lose that bet, but somehow I don't see her really minding. After all, as long as she has grandkids to corrupt....
don't know what a crack fic is. but this was a good one shot, very good in fact! thank you!!
"a toothpick, a business card and a blue inflatable pig"? The toothpick and the business card, OK! But the blue inflatable pig? This one, I didn't know... I'll have to research this! Is the color important? mumble-mumble...
"And flirted with Mini-Gai" Ooh! She did call him that in front of Gai!
"Tsunade noted Danzo go pale." Bwahahahaha! Given what already happened, I will guess that the test place was carefully chosen ;-p
"quickly taught Naruto a basic water technique"... Let me guess: he flooded the tunnels :-D (let's see if I'm right...) Bah? I didn't think about vapor... Bah! Same result!
"Thank you, thank you, thank you." Bwahahahahahaha! Thank you for this one :-D
"That’s a hip answer!" :-D
Thank you for this story.
At the beginning, I thought that it would REALLY be a banishment story (some are quite good...) but your twist on the classic theme was as fun to read as it was... simply fun!
this was a fun and laughable story. The addition of the betting pool was great.
Thanks for sharing,
Heh, this was a TOTALY different banishment story. :D I did laugh quite a bit. :)) Thanks for that. :)
Now that was fun. But please, you've gotta tell how the effects everything several months down the line! Does Akatsuki still attack? Does Orochimaru do unyouthful unmentionables to the traitor? C'mon, you've gotta fill us in!
this was glorious! Ilaughed so very hard
Like I've said before, although you focus mainly on Harry Potter you can write a really good Naruto fic. Despite it have no Naruto time it was a really good story and I have another story to add to my ever growing list of favorites. Thanks!
"...grinning like a necrophiliac in a morgue!" ~The Light Fantastic, Terry Pratchett