I love it and that is all I am going to say because if say more I am going to cry.
liked this one too, seriously, though I like niether the pairing, nor shortness, nor so much angsty, I want MOAR
I will gladly say that this was just
BRILLIANT. A nice touch of Dumbledore bashing
Sorry that wasn't very coherent.
That was incredibly well written. A bit cliche in certain parts, particularly M.M., but the quote, title and final line were so beautifully woven together that they make up for any small shortcomings.
You can definitely write angst! You made me cry... Well done. Helen
That was so . . . dark and . . . angsty and . . . I don't know . . . delicious?
That was definetaly good though!
You did this rather well, you know that? You captured the angst that you were trying to portray and ran with it.
I like how you had it end for Harry and Ginny, bringing happiness for them amongst the tragedy of their deaths.
WAAAHHHH! DAMN IT, YOU MADE ME CRY. AND I'M A GUY. Seriously, that was brilliant. I really enjoyed it. And yes you can write angst. Thank you for writing such a beautiful story.
Nyuh. Sorry, having problems verbalising what I'm feeling. Nyuh kind of sums it up. I'm sitting here in unblinking shock going "nyuh" as I can't think more than that. I knew it was a curse in control, I even suspected whose curse it was, but I didn't expect things to go that dark. Perfect. I mean it. Don't change a word. Wow. And one last time: NYUH.
quite an impressive short story
that was so sad but it was beautifully written i usualy don't read angst but something about this one caught my eye it was amazing thank you.
Quite good! My, my you really have it in for Dumbles (granted OotP made it quite easy).
Boy, can you write angst!
I love your story!!
I just love how you write angst ! it's soo sad ! it's like... what ?... the third time I read this story ?
you should write some more if you have good ideas.
good luck !
Damn that was rough but a damn good story
well. just so you know? you can write angst. very very well. interesting how that turned out...i really like the end, with ginny giving everyone a taste of what harry was really like. its a new twist. i really really like it!