The Abyss
By Jeconais
Reviews
Aelita posted a comment on Tuesday 30th October 2007 1:56pm for The Abyss
I love it and that is all I am going to say because if say more I am going to cry.
marie_M posted a comment on Sunday 21st October 2007 2:47am for The Abyss
liked this one too, seriously, though I like niether the pairing, nor shortness, nor so much angsty, I want MOAR
CraigPenguin posted a comment on Tuesday 14th August 2007 12:59am for The Abyss
Wow, very deep.
gadriam posted a comment on Sunday 15th July 2007 10:32am for The Abyss
....
wow
g
Amapapa posted a comment on Thursday 3rd May 2007 11:38am for The Abyss
I will gladly say that this was just
BRILLIANT. A nice touch of Dumbledore bashing
Berkeley posted a comment on Friday 13th April 2007 2:57pm for The Abyss
Nicey, nice.
Sorry that wasn't very coherent.
That was incredibly well written. A bit cliche in certain parts, particularly M.M., but the quote, title and final line were so beautifully woven together that they make up for any small shortcomings.
Bryher posted a comment on Sunday 7th January 2007 1:29pm for The Abyss
You can definitely write angst! You made me cry... Well done. Helen
Ben10 posted a comment on Friday 29th December 2006 4:24pm for The Abyss
That was so . . . dark and . . . angsty and . . . I don't know . . . delicious?
That was definetaly good though!
jgkitarel posted a comment on Thursday 14th December 2006 11:03am for The Abyss
You did this rather well, you know that? You captured the angst that you were trying to portray and ran with it.
I like how you had it end for Harry and Ginny, bringing happiness for them amongst the tragedy of their deaths.
Excellent work.
darthloki posted a comment on Thursday 12th October 2006 6:47pm for The Abyss
Good writing.
xBizzle posted a comment on Tuesday 29th August 2006 3:42pm for The Abyss
WAAAHHHH! DAMN IT, YOU MADE ME CRY. AND I'M A GUY. Seriously, that was brilliant. I really enjoyed it. And yes you can write angst. Thank you for writing such a beautiful story.
Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Tuesday 27th June 2006 3:46am for The Abyss
Nyuh. Sorry, having problems verbalising what I'm feeling. Nyuh kind of sums it up. I'm sitting here in unblinking shock going "nyuh" as I can't think more than that. I knew it was a curse in control, I even suspected whose curse it was, but I didn't expect things to go that dark. Perfect. I mean it. Don't change a word. Wow. And one last time: NYUH.
elvin posted a comment on Friday 16th June 2006 9:56am for The Abyss
quite an impressive short story
lemon drops posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 7:51pm for The Abyss
that was so sad but it was beautifully written i usualy don't read angst but something about this one caught my eye it was amazing thank you.
Justin W. Conley posted a comment on Sunday 23rd April 2006 8:23am for The Abyss
Quite good! My, my you really have it in for Dumbles (granted OotP made it quite easy).
Balakumar Sampath posted a comment on Monday 17th April 2006 10:28pm for The Abyss
Boy, can you write angst!
Mirime posted a comment on Friday 14th April 2006 6:24pm for The Abyss
Oh, Merlin!!
I love your story!!
It's great!!!
Mirime
ginyginger posted a comment on Thursday 2nd March 2006 2:01pm for The Abyss
I just love how you write angst ! it's soo sad ! it's like... what ?... the third time I read this story ?
you should write some more if you have good ideas.
good luck !
liquidfyre posted a comment on Wednesday 15th February 2006 7:43pm for The Abyss
Damn that was rough but a damn good story
Caz posted a comment on Thursday 27th March 2008 10:19am for The Abyss