Second Time Around
LOL, I was going to do a normal "this is great" review until I read the note at the end.
Well, the fic IS great and I'm sorry you won't continue, but I do have to say that the note at the end is the best! I love it!
oh please this is father out there than most i have read. if there is one or more out there that you think are further out then please let me know where i would like to read them.
i wished you might finish this one though. i do so love your writing style.
You had a great story going would love to see it finished, very well written, entertaining, some romance and some action. Hope one day you chance your mind.
Shit. I went through that and your damn note caught up with me. grrrrrrrrr. Im fond of cliches even though theyre cliches. :) Looking forward to more of your works. They're always something I can come back to.
i wish ud cont it
This could have been much better than canon. Please reconsider and continue it.
This story's off to a great start, so I hope you continue it at some point. It would be great if you let Harry and Ginny terrorise Dumbledork.
aw... i liked this one though. any possibility of you continuing it?
Grammatical, samatical. I just want to see where you go with this, PLEASE.
Translation: I think what I have read is very good, and would hope you continue with it.
May the MUSE be with you!!!
It would surely be a wondrous thing to read a Redo by you in this fashion, as the smooth and slightly laid-back style of your works fits so nicely into a plot where we all already know the surrounding trappings, which is why the Redo stories have such a charm on their own, and the precursors that saturates this chapters hold so many promises that i completely forgot how to end this outrageously praising sentence. There. I did it.
I know you said this wouldn't cut it, but I liked it and would have loved for it to have been continued.
please make this reglalarly updated story
Please do that other story or at least finish this one! It could be very interesting!
Actually, this has one of the best set-ups I've ever seen for the two-man(one man one woman) reset, and if you're not going to use it yourself, I think you should let it on the market as a continue on your own prologue/ challenge.
On a secondary note, I have an open idea that I've been passing on to various authors that I have yet to see happen for a reset. We've seen the 'everyone's dead and I killed Voldemort, but have nothing else to live for reset, the OOPS reset both Voldemort wins and there's nothing left for me reset, the we won and did well, but can do it better next time reset (the worst idea I've seen done yet), but I've never seen the "We've got the happy ending already!" reset. Which has several possible causes. My favorite one though, is the, I've lived my life, and can now go on to meet my parents and loved ones from old man Harry, only to wake up screaming from the killing curse rebounding off of his forehead. The story would be a very confused start, leading to several problems. 1. he knows how to deal with Voldemort but doing so will just mean ending up back as a fifteen month infant in the (he thinks) 2. Why his life reset to when it did on his death, and why at that point? 3.Will dying do it again? And if so what's the point to his life? This story would have it that death could only occur to a souls once, and that Harry's DID in fact die then, but his mother's sacrifice spell anchored it to his body. Every time his body dies, his mother's sacrifice latches on and drags it back to the point in time just before her sacrifice was made so he can move on, only for the sacrifice to happen again, it would ultimately end with Harry having to find a way to remove the spell that is entwined with his very soul to allow his to die and move on, at the end of his natural lifespan and not on the spot, as time was literally forced to rewind and an the other passed on souls would have none of the shared memories. I'm not a writer, and there would need to be a lot of work done, but there is a workable plot in it. If you use, merely quote Mikaerusan as the idea origin. Thanks. And if you would like a beta-reader, email me at firstname.lastname@example.org, as I would love to help along a writer who'se stories have been a pleasure to read for so long.
This is definitely a cool story! I'll admit I'm usually a fan of the redo storyline but this is one of the better ones out there. Though I will admit I have yet to read one of your stories I didn't like. It would be really cool if you were to continue this but I do know where you're coming from with the idea that this genre has become cliche.
I think this is really good. I like that Harry & Ginny could go back in time and try to fix things, it is nice that Harry came up with a plan to get Ginny to come to Hogswart a year before her time. It funny that Ginny work just right and sad that Harry does not, it make me wonder if Harry has less power the second time around. But that can't be right because he the only one who can kill Voldemort. I like that Ginny get revenge on Fred and George for scaring her, the twins learned not to mess with Ginny. I did find it odd that Arthur would run to Dumbledore over really nothing, I am sure that an lot of kids has done magic by mistake. The wandless magic's is a shock, but then again kids don't have wand's and that means that all accident magic is wandless. The best part is when Ginny and Harry reunion and start their relationship again and from the start. This was fun to read, but then again I have like all your story's
I can understand your reluctance at doing "yet another time-travel redo fic", but I haven't actually found any where 2 people go back together, and I think you could use that to have all kinds of fun.
That said, it's unlikely that an 11-year-old Harry and 10-year-old Ginny are going to manage to kill Voldemort all the way, so it's probably a big undertaking to get it to a finish, so I can understand going for other things first.
It was nice to re-read this - I am reminded again that a jeconais reject is better than most fanfic writer's very best efforts
thanks for letting me share in your imagination
Interesting start. Just think about continuing this story. A lot of people like seeing redo/time stories just to see what kind of creativity the author has. So maybe you will take this as a challenge to change the story line and make it funnier or what strikes your fancy. Looking forward to what you can come up with.
Whoa, nice bit of work here. This "story" is great, just like most of your other fics. But, like you said in your AN, to pull this off properly would take tons of work, going through the whole HP cycle again with quite major changes. Good job in terms of literal value though.