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Europec posted a comment on Tuesday 13th April 2010 11:57am for Second Time Around

Ha! WOnderful!

Rick D Gale posted a comment on Tuesday 24th November 2009 10:22pm for Second Time Around

I found myself with a few minutes to kill before going to bed and thought I's look at some of your earlier writings.

I must say I am greatly impressed!

I wish all of the 'redo' stories started out so good! I can just see Harry and Ginny playing havoc with the timeline an the people they interact with.

I get the impression that Ginny may have gotten Harry's 'core' on the trip back through time. We know that Harry would have given anything he could to keep her alive, and would make any sacrifice to see her alive. It would be a small price to pay, but then he would have to work extra hard to build his core up to where it was in ten years time.

Dumbledore is not going to know what hit him.

Harry will be independent and out of his control. And with Ginny by his side - almost unstoppable.

I understand why you didn't continue the story, but if you are ever looking for something to continue on with, please consider 'Second Time Around.'

Thank you for sharing your talent with us,

rdgale

delrusant posted a comment on Thursday 20th August 2009 6:39am for Second Time Around

Even if it won't be continued, it is still a well written first chapter that could end all the horcruxes pretty quickly, libertaing sirius, learning to apparate, and be happy with aa voldemort-free life in 1 to 2 hogwarts years.

lordlugos posted a comment on Thursday 6th August 2009 10:27pm for Second Time Around

Oh, that was definitely a good read. A bit better than most of the do over fics I've read. You should go on with it. I'd ask if I could, but, aside from the fact I couldn't do it justice, I already have a gazillion and one ideas that I'm working on at a snails pace. So, er, if you could, cast an imperious on your muse, to make you continue this. Please? :)

Cliff Bryner posted a comment on Saturday 18th July 2009 10:20am for Second Time Around

Hi. I just read this again. I would surely like to see you pursue this again. I think it could be very very fun. best wishes!

postal posted a comment on Thursday 26th February 2009 12:51pm for Second Time Around

would love if this was continued!

veemon posted a comment on Monday 12th January 2009 3:58pm for Second Time Around

god

veemon posted a comment on Saturday 10th January 2009 5:06pm for Second Time Around

try to contiue this it is good

Blaise (yes really) posted a comment on Saturday 13th December 2008 12:23am for Second Time Around

*cries* Why? Why is this in the drabbles section? *wails to the heavens* I WAS JUST GETTING WAY INTO IT, YOU JERK(S) UP THERE! YEAH, I KNOW YOU'RE LAUGHING AT ME!! Please, oh god please, take this out of the Drabbles and Ideas section and write more of it!

noylj posted a comment on Friday 7th November 2008 1:30pm for Second Time Around

More, need more story.
If possible, could you have Bumbles tried for kidnapping and child abuse?
Could Harry and Ginny simply make Snape and Lucy disappear? Start eliminating DEs? It may be simple and a slippery slope, but it seems the right thing to do.

pyrobabe7713 posted a comment on Wednesday 5th November 2008 1:52pm for Second Time Around

Are you sure that you don't want to continue this story? I think it could be really good.

alansch posted a comment on Wednesday 15th October 2008 11:37pm for Second Time Around

Hi.

I've just read and thoroughly enjoyed "Second Time Around". Even though it's a Harry/Ginny and I'm firmly entrenched in the Harmony camp, I *still* liked it (big grin).

I think it's a real shame that you are not likely to continue with the story as I'd love to see where you would head with it.

Cheers,
Alan

Tazz posted a comment on Friday 26th September 2008 2:56am for Second Time Around

Hi, I have never read an abandoned story (and I've read quite a few )before that I have so much desired to continue. I have now read all your stories, and am so curious. Why was this story abandoned? It's a great premise, and with you style, I know it would make a fantastic story. If you're worried that the idea is no good, be assured that it's a fantastic start. I love it. And BTW I didn't notice any great requirement for editing or grammar correction. You have an extremely easy style to read, and your stories are always believable. I've read over 2000 fanfics and can prove it, I've saved every one in Word format, and TMW is in my top Five list. Keep up the good work. Tazz

Amin posted a comment on Monday 22nd September 2008 1:48am for Second Time Around

A very good idea, i hope you continue with this

Patches posted a comment on Sunday 27th July 2008 2:53am for Second Time Around

I really like the way you have changed the story about Harry going back in time. Including Ginny is great. I love the scene with the twins. That was perfect. I'm sorry you're not going to write your own version of this because I know it would be great. The glimpse is fun though. Thanks for writing. I love your drabbles. pms

BecauseISaidSo posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 10:33am for Second Time Around

omg this is awesome. are you planning on adding any more to it?

millie johanson posted a comment on Sunday 6th July 2008 3:07am for Second Time Around

Hello, I read all about Second Time Around you wrote that it didn't cut it well I wish you would reconsider it. It was such a different side of the story. I was so sad when I read it over a year ago that you wouldn't be adding to it. I just reread it and I loved it more now than earlier. I love BiT stories. Most spend so much time trying not to change anything tat whats the point in doing it if you aren't going to make a difference.

Good luck with your writing.

Miss Millie
PS do you know /PhoenixAetemum (Janus) who wrote / Gift From the Past, Promise For the
Future? If so pleaseeeeeeeeeee ask him what we can do to encourage him them or who ever is writing it to please let us know............
my email is ...............
2emillie@comcast.net
like I said I loved your story.....and all the others I have of yours. All Night long, Alone, These Dreams The only Non H&G I like.

Shinobu Weasley posted a comment on Saturday 21st June 2008 8:53pm for Second Time Around

AWESOME!!!!

Vukk posted a comment on Friday 13th June 2008 12:27am for Second Time Around

One story I wish you would write more for, even if it is just the more important scenes...

Delcera posted a comment on Thursday 12th June 2008 7:34pm for Second Time Around

I must say, it's a shame you're not going to continue this. It would make a very interesting story. Maybe someday this could be polished and actually continued? Oh well. It doesn't matter. Very impressive work.