Second Time Around
Great story and I like it. Well done.
Hmm.. I think having Harry and Ginny coming back together like this with so much power is pretty out there - and kind of fun. Thanks for posting.
Hell of a first chapter, pity you're not going to go with it.
Thanks for writing and sharing it.
Shoot, an interesting start. Having read other 'redo's' I've an idea of where this could of gone. Thanks for sharing what you did.
Oh gee, and I was just getting into this! I enjoyed reading this, but couldn't help but wonder what caused Harry's magic not to work for him in his cupboard, while Ginny's magic worked exceptionally well for her? Loved how Harry got to finally take his life into his own hands and begin to make some serious changes that will help him...finding his solicitor, taking the trace off the wands, getting the Marauders Map back, planning to free Sirius, and best of all...the way he literally scared the pee out of Malfoy! A good read! :)
Whatever your feelings about this one, I enjoyed it. When I discovered HP fanfiction in 07 after DH came out, I came across numerous references to you. Obviously you were held in high esteem. I let myself get bogged down in SIYE for a long time, so have only recently discovered you here. Sure enough, you write excellent stories!
hey.....aren't u gonna continue this story???
I think you could do well writing a redo/alternate, this is a good, no, excellent, start.
Awww … I was really enjoying that!
this sounds good, please continue it
I have read a number of redo stories and have enjoyed most of them. This one had got off to a really good start. Pity you aren't going to continue it.
I found myself with a few minutes to kill before going to bed and thought I's look at some of your earlier writings.
I must say I am greatly impressed!
I wish all of the 'redo' stories started out so good! I can just see Harry and Ginny playing havoc with the timeline an the people they interact with.
I get the impression that Ginny may have gotten Harry's 'core' on the trip back through time. We know that Harry would have given anything he could to keep her alive, and would make any sacrifice to see her alive. It would be a small price to pay, but then he would have to work extra hard to build his core up to where it was in ten years time.
Dumbledore is not going to know what hit him.
Harry will be independent and out of his control. And with Ginny by his side - almost unstoppable.
I understand why you didn't continue the story, but if you are ever looking for something to continue on with, please consider 'Second Time Around.'
Thank you for sharing your talent with us,
Even if it won't be continued, it is still a well written first chapter that could end all the horcruxes pretty quickly, libertaing sirius, learning to apparate, and be happy with aa voldemort-free life in 1 to 2 hogwarts years.
Oh, that was definitely a good read. A bit better than most of the do over fics I've read. You should go on with it. I'd ask if I could, but, aside from the fact I couldn't do it justice, I already have a gazillion and one ideas that I'm working on at a snails pace. So, er, if you could, cast an imperious on your muse, to make you continue this. Please? :)
Hi. I just read this again. I would surely like to see you pursue this again. I think it could be very very fun. best wishes!
would love if this was continued!
try to contiue this it is good
*cries* Why? Why is this in the drabbles section? *wails to the heavens* I WAS JUST GETTING WAY INTO IT, YOU JERK(S) UP THERE! YEAH, I KNOW YOU'RE LAUGHING AT ME!! Please, oh god please, take this out of the Drabbles and Ideas section and write more of it!