Red And Yellow
Great Story, I like the different look and feel of the characters.
I loved it and would like to read a sequel that shows the prank on Malfoy, Moody getting reamed by Dumbledore, and the final fight.
Hey I always loved your stories, at least the ones that I seemed to be interested in. And to be honest I never was a big hannah fan so never read this, but I dont know today this story interested me, so I decided to give it a try. What can I say, I'm a idiot of course it is and was great, hell look who the writer was!
While this is great as is you should add to it a bit and end it post prank. :P
I would like to see what hapens to Draco and how he reacts.
I've come to the conclusion that it doesn't matter who you pair Harry with, you do a damn fine job writting it!
A really great work in catching Harry´s depression and how he got out of it. Great pairing too. Keep up the good job
“A feat which Harry was more than pleased was an analogy” was such a fantastic line and I’m thrilled to see that “just and loyal does not mean pushover” made it into another fic. I have to love Hannah now – she’s so fun. Fantastic ending – I love this darkened Harry.
I may have reviewed the 1st time I read it, but it just made me smile so much on the re-read that I wanted to thank you again Tim. - I, for one, truly appreciate the hard work you put into your writing and maintaining this website, and wanted to thank you again.
I liked this one very much
the 'oblivate me then' scene was espescally memorable, Keep up the excellent work!
Excellent story. Though I did notice something that bothers me a little bit.
“Stroke thought the ball,” she said softly, her breath brushing past his ear.
I'm taking a guess and saying that you meant to say through. Other then that one word it was a great story and I enjoy reading all of your work.
Any chances of there being a Harry/Su Li fic written by you eventually?
I always thought of Hannah as a cute Puffer. Having Dean leave the Pub was a nice surprise.
I never heard of shandies and I'm glad you explained them.
I enjoyed this a great deal. It didn't get too preachy. (cough kins cough fire cough lol)
You always do a good job.
As an avid Harry/Ginny shipper I am still trying to figure out what it is with your writing that enables me to really enjoy the other ships you have created. Your's are the first I have been able to do that with. I have yet to read one of your works that didn't have me completely enjoying the ship by the end of the fic. Thank you for that! Once again, please keep up the phenomenal work!
This is the first time that I have read this story of yours, and I actually like it. I have read quite a few others of yours, and find you and interesting writer. Keep up the good work.
This fic has potential beyond the one-shot it is now. When you've got nothing to do (yeah, as if that'll ever happen! *rolls eyes*), consider writing a continuation of this :)
I noticed a rather severe mistake in the part where Harry told his friends about the prophecy. "...as neither can live with the other dies..." I don't think this line is even close to what it is supposed to mean... Better correct it.
I think this needs a part 2
totally loved this story. it was like, brilliant dude!
Oh yay that was great! I don't think I've ever read any Harry/Hufflepuff fics before but I was in the mood for it, and found this story. Hannah was a lot bolder than I imagined but I loved that. Brilliant story.
I really liked this story, its not very often that you get to see a lesser known character focused upon. Particularly not the Hufflepuffs.