You know, I actually wouldn't mind reading a prequel to this story. His conversation with the king and queen must have been hilarious, not to mention his stick figures and "bad french". Know that if you ever write such a one-shot (I don't recon you want to write a complete story), I'll be more than happy to read it.
Keep up the good work!
And May The Words Be With You! ;)
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omg... I laughed and laughed at this. I can see why you won't continue it, but it was 100 percent worth the read. Thanks a million for posting this.
Love this story. Please finish this one. I'm begging you, please
dude no abandoning this was some funny s*** to read and i would love for the fact that it will be finished. please please please please please please
Literally breaking my jaw here laughing. I love the way he's 42nd to ask her and that's the meaning of life. Nice twist on the whole Hermione sets Harry up deal. LOL at the "last time I got irritated" line and the party idea. Only Harry could do this. The wedding stuff was a little less interesting but the Huttan was superb. Good story.
It has to be said that this was better than the vast majority of fan fiction that I have read for a while. I love the smart-arse Harry and is a delight to see no angst, no woe is me etc
I can understand why you felt it should be abandoned, but if you are really bored one day, perhaps, you could add a bit more on - it would have been nice to have at least got to the wedding. Oh well,I can hope....
“Chata wnow kong bantha poodoo.”
I don't think I've laughed that hard in weeks. Don't demean your work, instead treat it like a sitcom. It's a fun little character piece in which you've dropped certain characters into certain situations with certain backgrounds just to see how they'd react.
Wow. I've decided that I like your abandoned pieces better than most of the full-blown works of other authors. Keep it up; you've got a confirmed fan.
i read what you said at the start about this having a ternminal illness and can't for the life of me find it. this story has had me laughing my arse off. whoever said to have this story put down deserves to be beaten aroudn the head with a dead fish. basically this story is awesome. please do everyone a favour and pick it up again.
I love it so far. So, you abandoned it because it had no particular useful plot? What's wrong with just-plain-fluff?
Well, even if you weren't going to finish the story I still loved it. I loved Harry's personality, that was, in a word, hilarious. I a;ways loved fairytales, especially the handsome prince, or Lord Baron, ending up with the beautiful princess. Great job!
This was a very nice story, I like your use of humour as it was rather well written as most of your stories will attest to.
I was wondering if you will ever do a multi-chapter story where Harry goes Dark to fight Voldemort (I know you did WK, GQ which is a good story).
but its sooo funny, good job, i hope to see more humor like this in the future!
While your reasons for abandoning this piece are understandable, this was a terrifically fun read! Very interesting to see confident, take-charge! Harry in the arena of amor. Well done!
It made me chuckle and dare I say it, giggle.
Your stories tend to do that to me, it's getting slightly disconcerting to see this particular pattern emerging.
I say, stamp your stories with a *NSFW* (not safe for work) tag because coworkers (or even worse in my case, students) will give you odd looks.
I do like how you abandon stories before us lesser fanfic people see that it's going bad. Saves us disappointment and makes you look better!
On a not so positive note, a few typos here and there. But seeing that it's abandoned it can be overlooked ;)
Keep at it!
Why is it that most of your stories ivolve at some point me bouncing up and down on my chair in an extremely embarrassing manner and making some highly suspect giggling noises? Another fab story even if you didn't feel the need to finish it. Love the fact that Draco got turned into Bantha Fodder and that Harry defeated Voldy in a highly improbable but also highly satisfying (for those of us who like a little break from angst and goodies dieing now and again) way. Definite laugh a minute story. Congrats!
I have to disagree with the "terminally ill" aspect.
On the Malfoy ending you made for closure:
Ya coulda just have Harry do a pre-emptive strike - call the Ferret out the first time he even looks at Melissa and slot him.
And then have Harry do the fitting for the wedding. It would have made Malfoy nothing - less than a footnote.
This was hillarious i read it in the library at school and I almost choked 'cause I was laughing so hard.
I have to admit that every once in a while I love reading a super-duper-all-powerful Harry story.
I also realize why it had to die. No conflict, no where to go except pure fluff and that just doesn't work.
I did enjoy it, although I thought you'd end with the wedding.