Very interesting sory. I was very moved by your writing. A brilliant piece of work that I enjoyed reading.
This was a magnificent story not only about love and respect, but about human nature and emotions. You are an extremely talented writer and I really love your stories. If you need any help or any ideas, please send me a message. I wish you good luck on your future endeavors and writings.
Amazing, I think you are the only person I've ever read (and thats a lot) who has been able to do a H/Gabby to the point that I can belive it. And you've wrote two. Fantastic story, a really good job on both of their emotions.
Great story. Wish it it longer, but you can't have everything
I've reviewed this one before, but on re-reading, I think I was too harsh. The first half is, as you intended, "fun". It has baditude out the ears.
The second part is what really grabs me. I hesitate to call it romantic, as the pull just does't look like that, but there is a tenderness in their interaction that is quite touching.
The two parts are not wholly incompatible. You could make a truly beautiful story if you were to cut down the flirtation in the first half, and then put the develpment effort into the healing process.
As always, thanks for the tale!
May not be your favorite, but I like it.
I have known a few veterans that might recovered better from the ravages and the many kinds or injuries from war's they faught, with that kind of care and understanding.
Thank you for a good alternate ending.
May the MUSE be with you!!!
Probably one of the most romantic stories I've read - proving that romance does not require copious time in broom-closets.
That was a sweet (take that word in whatever context you wish) story. :)
Despite your intentions, you again created a masterful piece of work and I commend your writing. I love your original ideas and hope that you continue to write fanfiction.
Interesting premise involved here, regardless of the result, which was not too bad to begin with.
Oh well, you wrote something that was a nice piece in its' own right.
I think it is a story of a fight that leads to respect to comfort and it is a good one thank you
I know you say it wasn't your best work and maybe it wasn't, but it sure did touch me. It's not often that I cry when reading fanfiction. Congrats for achieving that
I love your Harry Gabrielle fics. I enjoy the way you have the characters play off of each other. I found the introduction of each other highly amusing and quite enjoyed the waltzing sequence and the booby traped floor. However, what really made this fic the greast piece that I belive it to be, is the interactions of Matt and his french counter part. I loved the bland way Matt had of saying he'd been to Hell and back. Anyway, TRhanks for posting and writting this. I really enjoyed it.
I love your writing. I found This Means War! on FF.Net and scrambled to find the rest.
Thinking on it the way you change the style of stories from humorous to dark is probably whay appeals to me most. So thank you very much.
Wow! This was amazing! I loved every minute of it!
I really liked this one because it is different from all of the rest. I liked it because i didn't have the fairytale feeling that alot of HP Fanfics have. Overall it is not my favourite ('This means war' took that position) but is definitly my favourite short story... good job!
omg i love love love love love it!! i love the way you don't know whats going to happen next (which probably came from how you didnt plan it to be like this) ... its soo good ... i probs sound completely obsessed and weird, but i just like it.<br><br>its great!! LoVeBiRd
Great little story. I think more comfort with a lot of great fight action mixed in. I love the stuff with Henry the Fifth quotes and trips into hell but it's the tenderness that makes it so good.
Briliant as always. It's a plesure to read your stories.