Once More
By Jeconais
Reviews
hogwartsprincess posted a comment on Wednesday 26th December 2007 4:38pm for Once More
Very interesting sory. I was very moved by your writing. A brilliant piece of work that I enjoyed reading.
RavenclawHeir posted a comment on Wednesday 26th December 2007 1:12pm for Once More
This was a magnificent story not only about love and respect, but about human nature and emotions. You are an extremely talented writer and I really love your stories. If you need any help or any ideas, please send me a message. I wish you good luck on your future endeavors and writings.
greatniz posted a comment on Saturday 22nd December 2007 2:13pm for Once More
Amazing, I think you are the only person I've ever read (and thats a lot) who has been able to do a H/Gabby to the point that I can belive it. And you've wrote two. Fantastic story, a really good job on both of their emotions.
MrPowell posted a comment on Saturday 15th December 2007 6:59pm for Once More
Great story. Wish it it longer, but you can't have everything
KenF posted a comment on Tuesday 4th December 2007 5:52pm for Once More
I've reviewed this one before, but on re-reading, I think I was too harsh. The first half is, as you intended, "fun". It has baditude out the ears.
The second part is what really grabs me. I hesitate to call it romantic, as the pull just does't look like that, but there is a tenderness in their interaction that is quite touching.
The two parts are not wholly incompatible. You could make a truly beautiful story if you were to cut down the flirtation in the first half, and then put the develpment effort into the healing process.
As always, thanks for the tale!
Drifter950 posted a comment on Sunday 18th November 2007 4:09pm for Once More
May not be your favorite, but I like it.
I have known a few veterans that might recovered better from the ravages and the many kinds or injuries from war's they faught, with that kind of care and understanding.
Thank you for a good alternate ending.
May the MUSE be with you!!!
Alex Austin posted a comment on Wednesday 14th November 2007 5:52pm for Once More
Probably one of the most romantic stories I've read - proving that romance does not require copious time in broom-closets.
Brian Donnely posted a comment on Wednesday 14th November 2007 2:21pm for Once More
That was a sweet (take that word in whatever context you wish) story. :)
Immortalitis posted a comment on Monday 12th November 2007 10:51pm for Once More
Amazing story!
matthiasblack posted a comment on Monday 29th October 2007 11:26am for Once More
Despite your intentions, you again created a masterful piece of work and I commend your writing. I love your original ideas and hope that you continue to write fanfiction.
jgkitarel posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 3:08am for Once More
Interesting premise involved here, regardless of the result, which was not too bad to begin with.
Oh well, you wrote something that was a nice piece in its' own right.
Hemotem posted a comment on Sunday 9th September 2007 9:02pm for Once More
I think it is a story of a fight that leads to respect to comfort and it is a good one thank you
Hemotem
mashimaromadness posted a comment on Monday 3rd September 2007 10:09pm for Once More
I know you say it wasn't your best work and maybe it wasn't, but it sure did touch me. It's not often that I cry when reading fanfiction. Congrats for achieving that
ctattrie posted a comment on Monday 3rd September 2007 1:57pm for Once More
I love your Harry Gabrielle fics. I enjoy the way you have the characters play off of each other. I found the introduction of each other highly amusing and quite enjoyed the waltzing sequence and the booby traped floor. However, what really made this fic the greast piece that I belive it to be, is the interactions of Matt and his french counter part. I loved the bland way Matt had of saying he'd been to Hell and back. Anyway, TRhanks for posting and writting this. I really enjoyed it.
Mark Willson posted a comment on Sunday 2nd September 2007 11:20am for Once More
I love your writing. I found This Means War! on FF.Net and scrambled to find the rest.
Thinking on it the way you change the style of stories from humorous to dark is probably whay appeals to me most. So thank you very much.
Mark
SHSTigurlof06 posted a comment on Friday 31st August 2007 5:47am for Once More
Wow! This was amazing! I loved every minute of it!
Concha
cire444 posted a comment on Wednesday 29th August 2007 6:53pm for Once More
I really liked this one because it is different from all of the rest. I liked it because i didn't have the fairytale feeling that alot of HP Fanfics have. Overall it is not my favourite ('This means war' took that position) but is definitly my favourite short story... good job!
LoVeBiRd posted a comment on Thursday 23rd August 2007 12:12am for Once More
omg i love love love love love it!! i love the way you don't know whats going to happen next (which probably came from how you didnt plan it to be like this) ... its soo good ... i probs sound completely obsessed and weird, but i just like it.<br><br>its great!! LoVeBiRd
Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd August 2007 1:52pm for Once More
Great little story. I think more comfort with a lot of great fight action mixed in. I love the stuff with Henry the Fifth quotes and trips into hell but it's the tenderness that makes it so good.
LoganBlackisle posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd August 2007 9:06am for Once More
Briliant as always. It's a plesure to read your stories.
Logan Blackisle