No Good Deed
Interesting to see maturity on both sides. The answer to the Cruciatus is innovative, yet has a nice logic to it. I like Cho's ideas about PR, too.
Thanks for posting.
I did not know I will like it this much. And I finally read a nice Dumbledore. There's just too much bashing of that character.
Very interesting. And a brilliant point - ignoring the walking talking charlie-foxtrot that is Dumbledore, if Harry had the first clue about what he was doing it would all have been over by the end of the sixth book.
LoL! This story has it all! Drama, action, romance, humor, etc. ;) Loved it! :D Everything really is unexpected when it comes to Harry... :)
I think only Harry Potter and the Autumn Swan has done Harry/Cho as well. And it's a "hell you thinking, people?" couple for me, so it takes more to make me accept it. You do it here.
This has to be one of the best Harry/Cho fanfics ive read. Good job!
Nice twist of fate, the butterfly decided not flow with the current this time ;-)
I really liked this story as well. Yes, I'm probably going to sit and read all of your stories before I find another author to read. This one chapter has definitely got the possibility for a pretty good bigger story. Looking forward to the rest of your work.
Wow, not a fan of Harry/Cho fics but this one was really really good! I loved it! Thank you so much! Could there maybe be a sequel?
great story wish you would have kept it up though. Best regards
I've read a lot of fan-fiction, and I just want to say that this story ranks right up there in the top-10 short stories. Excellent point, and well-told. Almost sorry the story was complete, I liked that relationship a lot, it was nice to have something other than the usual pairing.
very well done, was beliveable that it could happen that way and how no man (or women) knows all. It takes many ideas to form a plan that works.
Hmmm, I'm not a big Cho fan, but this one seems to work well. I must say, I like your writing style
This is brilliant. Is there gonna be any more?
I'm amazed that I actually like Cho in this story. Well done.
I enjoyed this reading this one too.
May the MUSE be with you!!!
Love it! Great job, I usually only read Ginny pieces but I am really glad I read this one!
I *LOVE* how you write Harry in your stories! You give him a mature edge he is missing in so many other stories. It's not overdone but he's not the immature, whiny, kid he was in so many stories (or the books) either. HE THINKS.
Sure he has to be hit over the head sometimes with a bludger - and Cho wields a good one.
And I liked your Cho - a mature, kind and very, very intelligent Cho - just the kind of girlfriend Harry REALLY needs...
Ah, nice and sappy, to me anyways. Hmm, I wonder how Cho would stand against Hermione. It seems both are bossy and more intelligent than is good, among other things. Heh, if both were someone's friends, it would be an interesting friendship for sure. You do make me curious about overcoming those unforgivables, though. Too bad all this is fictional (unless magic does exist and it is just screwing around with those that cannot use it).
It is always fun to read things that purport (well, the definition of -small- is always debatable, as is how people should react to it) to change only one thing.
Wow. I got recommended to read your works by one of my friends and wow, was I not disappointed. I normally don't like Harry/Cho but I really liked this one. It was moving and interesting. I really love your Cho. She's nice, smart and funny.