Nightshade
By Jeconais
Reviews
EvilGenius posted a comment on Thursday 30th August 2012 10:31pm for Nightshade
Innovative and intriguing plot. It's a shame that story wil see no update whatsoever.
dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 6:02am for Nightshade
"My Lord?" Wormtail said, his voice quaking in fear.
"What?" Voldemort demanded.
"Forgive me, my Lord, but would it not be better to just kill him?"
"Idiot," Voldemort screamed. "Crucio!"
LOL!
Shades of Scott Evil!
mathmans posted a comment on Sunday 27th April 2008 8:50am for Nightshade
I think this story could be better then you think, and not near as clichéd if you focused more one the darker aspects of the story.
Ceres posted a comment on Saturday 9th February 2008 7:22am for Nightshade
dude this sounds a lil well naughty. keep it up
gadriam posted a comment on Friday 16th November 2007 4:13am for Nightshade
Well, this would have been a fun read, but not quite up to scratch. I agree that there are more promising plots you could spend your time on.
Thank you for this snippet, though. Reading your stuff is never wasted time.
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Aelita posted a comment on Thursday 1st November 2007 3:31pm for Nightshade
ummmm...interesting I do like it but it is different
John Nathan posted a comment on Saturday 15th September 2007 3:01am for Nightshade
Err...It already is an adult fanfic. Now, I was thinking of something other than a Cruciatus to drive Narcissa to harry's side...something bella made her do to seduce harry...thinking about it
BloodRedJawz posted a comment on Thursday 6th September 2007 5:45pm for Nightshade
...You know, I think I'd really like to see this. If you turned it into an adult fanfic, I think it would be extremely interesting...
John Nathan posted a comment on Thursday 6th September 2007 2:50am for Nightshade
Hey, could I continue your story? I'll still follow the outline and all that. Please?
ShellyBelly posted a comment on Tuesday 21st August 2007 2:38pm for Nightshade
Aren't most fanfics cliche? I think you should continue this story it could be really cood.
ShellyBelly
Illusia posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2007 2:07pm for Nightshade
What stories you've been reading? Althought the black cat fight could be classified as a cliche, I've never yet read it done quite like that :)
digger posted a comment on Saturday 28th April 2007 11:20pm for Nightshade
you have a few stories with very obvious cliches in them yet, you have done them in interesting ways. Please give this one a shot. There are very few good narcissa stories out there. this could be one of them.
ahyanah posted a comment on Tuesday 24th April 2007 3:04am for Nightshade
cool
rascaldi posted a comment on Monday 23rd April 2007 12:57pm for Nightshade
so?
the problem being? there's so much fanfiction out there, that everything that's written can be called cliché. I say: go for it, your dialogue is good, being canon goes out of the window with a Harry-Bella/Harry-Narcissa pairing and extra points would come for Snape being evil and Harry fleeing with both, because they are overwhelmed by Harrys "Sex-Whammy" or whatever.
See you
rasc
Fishburne posted a comment on Monday 23rd April 2007 9:47am for Nightshade
um. ok. interesting...and dang, I giggled insanely at "his... his... thing"
I bet, even as clichéd as you say this is, that it would still be one hell of a romp.
Fish
Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Monday 23rd April 2007 8:42am for Nightshade
Interesting list of cliches. Harry taunting Bella was really amusing. Voldemort was good fun though if he AK's all his Death Eaters so easily then he must have a near infinite supply. Good story.
Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Monday 23rd April 2007 4:38am for Nightshade
Neat section, and I actually like this idea a lot, and think that it would have been fun to have seen what would have happened, though I hope it wouldn't have had Harry in the middle holding apart Bella and Cissa while they tried to pull hair, LOL.
JVTazz posted a comment on Sunday 22nd April 2007 9:49pm for Nightshade
you could always maintain it so Snape is not on the light side, and that Bella and Narcissa do exactly as Voldy requested, failing or succeeding would be up to you obviously Harry may even eventually fall and do like Voldemort stated, or even continue to hold out until they have enough and kill him or they could send him back as broken as anyone could be.
Wayne Price posted a comment on Sunday 22nd April 2007 7:12pm for Nightshade
"My Lord?" Wormtail said, his voice quaking in fear.
"What?" Voldemort demanded.
"Forgive me, my Lord, but would it not be better to just kill him?"
"Idiot," Voldemort screamed. "Crucio!"
ScottEvil!Wormtail
I do agree, though. This would only be readable as an over-the-top parody as a multichaptered fic. As a one shot, though, quite amusing.
Nytefyre posted a comment on Saturday 26th January 2013 4:57pm for Nightshade