Tora58 posted a comment on Thursday 25th May 2017 3:24am for Motivations

Is this what you wanted Pureblood Princess to actually be? That always felt a little flat and this certainly fits what I precieve your writing style to be but still has a a but of that pureblood spin to it.

Still this was a fun read and thank you for sharing.

sanbeegoldiewhitey posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2017 6:03pm for Motivations

I thought in canon, Draco married the better girl in Astoria compared to Harry's Ginny. JKR said Astoria prevented Scorpius from being raised by Draco as a pureblood bigot. I like this story much better than Blue Steel because the latter had no resolution at the ending.

Yar posted a comment on Sunday 9th April 2017 12:33am for Motivations

It's a nice piece of work, even if I have issues with how fast the Death Eaters went about-face. I quite enjoy the descriptions of a developing first relationship, and I wish them well. Thank you for the story.

Full_Pensieve posted a comment on Saturday 18th February 2017 9:16pm for Motivations

I wanted to love this, but I like it instead. The idea of Harry finding his own circle over time is a good one, and the way you go about it is very organic. Astoria is what's not working for me here, and it took me two reads to zero in on that. I get that you have a recurring theme of the "living in a fairytale" relationship/courtship - which is fine, and you do it well - and you even subvert the theme to some degree here, but for some reason that I just can't quite pinpoint it feels hollow to me this time around. I wish I could cite chapter and verse for why I'm reacting that way, but can't boil it down to a particular "aha!" moment. Having said that, there are so many nice moments in here, I had to like it as a whole. :)

Lopendria posted a comment on Friday 17th February 2017 1:22pm for Motivations

Another Masterpiece. I wish I'd caught this when it came out, but meh... Keep up the great work. I appreciate all your writing!

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Sunday 5th February 2017 11:05pm for Motivations

All in all, a very fun one-shot, even if a tad on the long side. I quite enjoyed the divergence that one club makes in the flow of events. A most enjoyable story.

RHJunior posted a comment on Sunday 29th January 2017 8:32pm for Motivations

"infinite" doesn't mean that anything can happen, or will. For example there are an infinite number of numbers between zero and one... but you can search for eternity there and never find the number 2.

luckycharm posted a comment on Monday 23rd January 2017 6:08am for Motivations

Thanks for this story. I absolutely loved it. Very thoughtfully written.

kagey_98 posted a comment on Tuesday 27th December 2016 6:27pm for Motivations

Ok, I'm late to the party, but ran across you Fic as a recomendation, and have now read thru most. Most were a great read, and very enjoyable. Thank you for sharing your talent, and look forward to reading more.

Novonia posted a comment on Tuesday 13th December 2016 1:18am for Motivations

I love this story, I do wish we can see what happens next.

Kuroi posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2016 10:38pm for Motivations

Lovely story.

The ending just leaves me wanting just a little bit more which is slightly frustrating and making me want to beg for more. Yet I absolutely love how you did it because of that fact.

You now have me going on a merry search for more great Harry/Astoria writings because this one has got me addicted.

One of the best writings I have read all year.

Keep up the amazing work!

Mrreading posted a comment on Thursday 17th November 2016 4:31am for Motivations

nice one shot when are you planing to post the next update

JJbelle posted a comment on Tuesday 8th November 2016 10:40pm for Motivations

Thank you for an absolutely awesome story, loved it!

nokoi posted a comment on Wednesday 26th October 2016 8:02am for Motivations

I just wanted to let you know that I have read this story five times and have loved it more each time. Thank you for the care and effort that you put into your stories.

Tony

Shady posted a comment on Tuesday 25th October 2016 6:08am for Motivations

I came back to read Pureblood Princess again, and was honestly so surprised and delighted to see you had posted!!!!!!! it was lovely to read your writing again

BooksMH85 posted a comment on Sunday 23rd October 2016 1:02am for Motivations

It's odd; I remember reading part of this before, but I have no idea if I read the whole thing before or just the first chapters. Well, now I see that this is a oneshot. (blushes) That means that I read the whole thing and didn't recall the ending with the lovely little Terry Pratchett homage. I really like this one. Thank you for sharing it with us lazy slobs that just read what others write.

In a way the Society answers a lot of complaints that teachers have with Hogwarts; that it ignores real world useful skills, like maths, Englsh and poker. Also that it ignores the arts and all sports except one played by something less than one tenth of the total student body. Not having ever attended a boarding school, I realy do not know, but wouldn't some sort of bonding and mutual support be necessary other than the House System? The Society would do that too.

Ugh. I am babbling. Time to call it a night. Thanks for this Astoria. She makes me smile.

foreceflow02 posted a comment on Friday 14th October 2016 12:07pm for Motivations

Hey! I've been rereading some of your older stories recently, and I must say: It is absolutely fascinating to see how your writing style has matured over the years. Thanks for all the fond memories, sir, and here's to hoping for many more!

TheirTheyre posted a comment on Sunday 25th September 2016 7:49pm for Motivations

Wonderful story - love the idea of the club!

ButterLife365 posted a comment on Tuesday 20th September 2016 6:29am for Motivations

This was very very very good, a little weak in places but I feel it works.

I feel like the Malfoys could've used more introduction, the reaction to Isabelle was a little quieter then it probably would've been but all the same I liked it well enough.

KirijamaScion posted a comment on Monday 29th August 2016 8:08pm for Motivations

Fantastic job. Well done