Interesting teaser in a mystery flashback as told to someone else style. Could have been fun to find out what it was and just how big a badass HP became.
Thanks for posting.
It's neat, Tim -- if this plot bunny revives and bites you on the arse again, I'll enjoy whatever the results happen to be.
Thanks for sharing.
Hmm. Whenever i start reading certain stories, i get a chill that tells me "This is going to be sooooo good!". This one had that chill. The perspective of the storytelling, the darkish, black-and-white feel of the story was something i haven't encountered before and i was certainly enthralled.
It's too good to be left like this. Perhaps it should remain a short story, but it's worth a few hours of think'n'type, in my opinion. In your own time, of course. Whatever you write is certainly readworthy.
Hell, I'd read your grocery list....
This sounds interesting. If you ever pick it up, it would be fun to see where it goes.
Who is she talking to and what happened to her and Harry?
why was Harry smoking?
*snifflesob* i really want u to continue this story. and, wonderfully, there is hope. a slight hope that i am holding on to. pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease
Oh damn. I knew I recognized that quote from somewhere! I was figuring it must have been just a fic with a hint of xoverslang but it was Hamlet in the epi. nice.
Loved it, but then I really enjoy this kind of work. I'd be most curious where you take this, if you do someday.
And if this is "atrocious" grammar, as per the disclaimer, then I should be so lucky as to be so atrocious.
I definitly think that u should pick this up again, it sounds really good
Well, that's quite a start. And we're left wondering what sort of Lovecraftian horror has been unleashed by some Death Eater spawn who didn't die at the last battle.
Pulls you in. But who is she telling this to?
Hope you continue this some day.
UGH. i realllllllly shouldnt have read this. cuz theres no more and i want to know what happened. UGH.
A drabble with a lot of potential, I do hope you pick this one up again. Keep up the great work!
errr "recant" or "recount" in the blurb? But please keep this one going too! (I can see you've got a lot on your plate but maybe on the backburner or something?)
Reference to your notes. As many people would agree, many of your "throw-aways" are a lot better than many 30 chapter dull monsters ( and lets not start on the speel checkers ).
This was good. I liked the thing in the dark especially. Hope that this is continued some day. More please.
Drabble my sweet Aunt Fannie.
Now you Gotta! You just Gotta! keep this one going.
Amazing and intriguing at the same time.
hmmm... would love to see the rest of this.
Quite dramatic. Of course Harry is the only one it could have been to save her. Can't see Harry smoking though. I can see him wearing dragon hide. Was it just Susan's imagination? Her own heavy breathing? You wrote! Do you know? Thanks for writing. I enjoy your mind ticklers. pms
OK, this is just wierd. It might be a good opening for a longer story.