Interesting story, this is one that would be good to continue. No problems that I could see, and I especially liked Natalie... she makes a good comedy relief. Keep up the good work.
*snicker* Nothing exactly memorable, but a good, fun read and quite enjoyable. Thank you, Tim, I always enjoy the tidbits we get.
you don't have to put any effort into tidying the story, but PLEASE continue it!!! I love Tracey's sister!!! Also, you've not got any more chapters of your bugs bunny fic have you?!?!?!?
Wooo! I love your drabbles. They're a perfect play on gorgeously outrageous ideas. Or maybe they're not that outrageous after all. Anyway, they're fun to read and I love them. I can imagine that diving in gold is something you'd need to be Scrooge McDuck to manage - not that I've ever seen a pile big enough to try.
this is an excellent start, and I feel it could use more story added onto it. Like 20 or 30 chapters.
Ironically enough, after the first Reference to Scrooge McDuck, I too was playing the DuckTales Theme in my head.
Are there house-elves named Hewy, Dewy, and Lewy? I thought I saw them dashing around the 3rd piller when the Davis's floo'ed in...
Awsome little tale! Thanks for keeping us laughing!
hmm...not bad all in all. has the premise for a good story but i can see why you didnt continue it. i wish u did though. or maybe thats just my craving for something new from you b/c ur amazing and i want another story. ;)
pretty funny :)
just what i need after spending hours doing college work with no breaks
ROTFLMAO! This is really funny!
Cute Fic. Nice, fun, and "sledding on a pile of gold."
Been a while since I even THOUGHT about Duck Tales, especially when the kids have been grown up for longer than I care to say... As to the rest of them not being able to swim in it, well the triplets couldn't either. Must be a Scrooge thing.
Goblin Evilgit? Subtle, very subtle.
that was a great deal of fun - the visuals are too cool and indeed bring back the nicer aspects of Ducktales.
thanks again fro proving that even your castoffs are better than 90% of the fics out there.
Ergh. I suppose it's a blessing that this won't be pursued.
This was a total riot and had me laughing so hard my wife thought I was going to stop breathing. Thanks for the wonderful read.
Hoot Mon, Ducktales rocks, and so does this fic! That was a cute moment with little Natalie, who's already getting her hooks in Harry, (Tracey had better hurry, LOL), and just a fun read here.
Hahaha, the part with tracey and her sister trying to swim like McDuck cracked me up
I see definite possibilities here. I can also see a few hard questions to have to deal with, mostly revolving around how Harry treats the rest of the world and if it makes sense. Oh well, I look forward to your next real story.
If I can add a point to some magical tally that determines what you work on next, :-) I'd increment the counter for the various "White Knight, Gray Queen" missing moments.
Thanks for sharing!
I thought you did a marvelous job on the story. It was funny and amusing. Hope you do a lot more of them. regards Kyoshi