By Jeconais
Reviews
jilumasam posted a comment on Sunday 5th December 2010 6:54am
I don't understand why this was placed in the abandoned list. To me it is a relatively complete one-shot. There's not much more I would do for this one...
Abraxan posted a comment on Monday 26th July 2010 9:17am
This is as complete as it needs to be and is a fun read! I think you should put with the completed stories. Well done.
Abraxan
avidreaderbz posted a comment on Saturday 5th June 2010 1:31am
seems finished to me! and i wish i could write anything that is as good as apparently your first attempt...*sigh*
darthloki posted a comment on Tuesday 11th May 2010 9:15am
I think the whole idea is totally awesome, from Harry fighting Voldie in Ginny's mind to the aweosme wandless powers. Sometihng I could see happening is that if Harry's use of his magic is unconscious, it could do all kinds of things his conscious mind might say 'uh-oh, not good' to. I can see what you mean about Generic-Ginny, but still, it's not whether something's cliched, it's how well you use the cliche.
darthloki posted a comment on Tuesday 11th May 2010 9:12am
Would you mind if I borrowed this idea and turned it into a fic? With full credit to you, of course.
riegert8 posted a comment on Saturday 2nd August 2008 7:02pm
I think that this is a very good story, It interesting what Harry would do to save a friend. The part is that Ginny finally got Harry, It seem that Ginny is perfect for Harry.
It sad that this story is in abandon section, I think that this story could fit under the section of One shot story that is complete. For the reason is that it finish with the Book and at the beginning we know how Harry find the book, I admit it be nice to know where Harry got the book since he need so much.
Lady_Hope posted a comment on Monday 26th May 2008 2:46pm
*sooooooooooobbb** why did u have to abandon it??
ugh, i hate the logic of my brain sometimes. cuz i can see perfectly good reasons, i guess. How far would u have been able to take it? i mean, where was it going? I can tell its some of ur earlier work- not as good as other stuff. But w/ polishing up...ssiigghh...
i wish ud mad eit just a little longer, though, so we could see what happens. :'(
oh well.
Aelita posted a comment on Thursday 27th March 2008 6:16am
Two words: Love it
Great Job
DA Jones posted a comment on Monday 17th December 2007 9:04am
This shouldn't be in the abndoned section just because it was one of your first fics. Plainly put this is one of the best HArry/Ginny stories I've ever read, A little long perhaps. It should probably be cut back to the scene where Ms. Wealsey places the blanket on them. TRhe rest seems superflorous.
Sarah Cox posted a comment on Saturday 24th November 2007 10:17pm
I think this is very good. No we didn't find out about what the spells were or his increase in power, but as a one shot this could deffinately work.
Haeton posted a comment on Friday 2nd November 2007 12:10pm
Wow, I can see the ideas for This Means War but this story has definitely got its own legs. I understand your point about not being able to write every idea you have because you come up with so many. I would love to see exactly what all this power could develop into, but alas it has been abandoned.
yogibear990 posted a comment on Wednesday 17th October 2007 6:39am
I love it, some don't like the super-Harry aspect, but I've come to enjoy the unusual ways it gets done sometimes, and I haven't read one from this aspect yet, love your style, even if you never finsh it, thanks
Rogue posted a comment on Monday 24th September 2007 8:08am
I'm rather curious as to why this particular story has been abandoned rather than declared finished as-is. After having gone through it, I find myself favourably looking upon it as a sort of a short story.
It fits that niche of "fun little story" too nicely to sit collecting dust in the abandonment heap.
hptrump posted a comment on Thursday 6th September 2007 5:36pm
Now take a moment to check out some of the other websites. You will find the number of Harry & Ginny pairings have been greatly out numbered by some many other pairings. The is a really enjoyable story. Maybe someday soon you will pick this back up. Looking forward to more of your work.
finally_sso posted a comment on Thursday 23rd August 2007 6:56pm
This is a good story but it need a ending. You should finish this story please.
pfeil posted a comment on Sunday 19th August 2007 2:15pm
I liked where this was going, but seeing that abandoning it seems to have lead to WK/GQ, I'm not going to complain.
KenF posted a comment on Friday 6th April 2007 7:48am
Hmmm... funny effect of expanding Harry's mind, but probably makes him too powerful to be any fun. As soon as he realizes that V needs defeating, V will be defeated and Harry won't even have to try.
Random_Guy posted a comment on Thursday 11th January 2007 7:38am
I find it quite amusing that a story you appear to have dismissed as not good enough is actually better than the flagship stories of many other fan fiction authors out there.
That having been said, I can see why you would abandon this one; while it is a good story it does give the feeling that it would not quite have the stength to carry off being a novel length work.
I am glad you posted it however, since it does make an excellent one-shot piece.
- Random_Guy
CootiePatootie posted a comment on Sunday 6th August 2006 7:58pm
You know, you have this as "abandoned" but it stands alone quite nicely.
This is a change from the usual my-magic-can-do-anything uber Harry stories; I like the idea of his brain forming "new" pathways and these new pathways becoming instinctive/unthinking wandless magic.
While the idea of Ginny having nightmares/not eating/ etc. thing is not entirely new it is a bit more believable in this one, especially the manner in which she woke up the entire household.
I like that your Dumbledore stood back and let things happen. Perhaps I've read a few too many "manipulative Dumbledore" stories lately. ;-)
I enjoyed this immensely. Thank you.
Cheers,
Cassie
Nytefyre posted a comment on Wednesday 16th January 2013 2:43pm