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kanazak posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd August 2016 12:58am

Wow, this story was truly entertaining. I realy have loved reading this. I hope your promised next two chapters arrive soon!

Thanks for sharing this with the world, it certainly has brightened my day to read it.

ibskib posted a comment on Thursday 5th May 2016 6:29pm

Annoying how the word kami is missused, it is NOT a synonym for God.

It means something closer to spirits/manifestations, though some of those spirits might be worshipped as deities, so it is sometimes translated as a god/gods, Always lower case g, though spirits is the more accurate one, there is no Kami/Kami-sama as some fanfics write it.

If you want to use japanese deities, then there isn't really a headgod in the same way as the christian God/Zeus etc., but you could use Amaterasu the sun goddess, she's the closest thing to a primary god that Shinto has, though isn't oficially one.

tanishia posted a comment on Saturday 13th February 2016 12:49am

Ok quick question do you think you'll ever finish this? Just read again for like the 4th time and I think I love even more than the first 3 times. Looking forward to new chapters.

4rm36uy posted a comment on Friday 4th December 2015 6:35am

are you ever going to finish the two chapters?

Alucard1126 posted a comment on Tuesday 1st December 2015 3:23am

I have read and re-read this fic more times then I care to count, it sucks having to take off my socks and shoes to do so, and everytime I read it, I laugh and smile. I really want to know how the summons thing works out along with the rest of the chunin exams, I know that you're not writing all the time, but if you lack something to kill time, I would greatly appreciate a new chapter for Konoha's legion.

Z C posted a comment on Thursday 1st October 2015 3:50am

For something outside your usual fandoms and writing styles, this is an excellent story, one that I rered a lot.

But it now been almost three years since you updated this story. Can you please update this soon? Or at least let us know that you lost inspiration and can't finish it, maybe with a summary of how you were planning on ending it? You DID say only two chapters left, so you had an outline or at least a loose collection of scenes.

Thank you for all your wonderful stories.

Jenara posted a comment on Wednesday 1st July 2015 11:00pm

I know it's been a long time since you updated this, but I do hope you continue the story, the vitality of your writing draws me in every time. I know you claim to not be able to write as well as you used to, and that you are not a professional. To me it doesn't matter, You write better than than most and your characters have a way of catching people's attention and drawing them into the story. Just my opinion of course, but from most of the other reviews I'm not the only one that feels that way.

mandolore1 posted a comment on Thursday 26th March 2015 6:00am

add more please soon

loretta537 posted a comment on Monday 16th March 2015 2:23am

this is a great story, please update it soon

Rogue15us posted a comment on Sunday 15th March 2015 3:36am

Just re-read this from scratch. Really impressive storline, clones are always fun when used intelligently.

munna posted a comment on Sunday 1st March 2015 6:42am

I have been waiting for nearly 2 years for those last 2 chapters. Are you ever going to post them or should I just stop checking for an update regularly?

asvaldson posted a comment on Tuesday 24th February 2015 10:06am

I love this story, it's a shame that you never posted the two more chapters you spoke about at the end of this one.

KaijuVsBijuu posted a comment on Tuesday 20th January 2015 12:28pm

nice, never in my life have i read a perfectly good story written and told by an aurther, that cause me to read the same story twice in one day. nice job and keep up the good work.

sekmarc posted a comment on Friday 5th December 2014 3:04am

So I've read this story for what I think may be the fourth time, maybe fifth, and I'm still hoping to see the promised last two chapters. I love this story and will probably continue to read it, even unfinished, for a long time to come. Thanks for sharing! Happy Writing!

asvaldson posted a comment on Thursday 4th December 2014 9:21pm

O my god this story is awesome. I've only recently started reading the naruto Fandom but I've been a long time fan of your works. It's a huge shame is been two years since an update

solitare99 posted a comment on Sunday 26th October 2014 9:22pm

I love this story, but there were some real problems in this chapter. I don't know how Lee usually acts towards women, but in Tenten's case, Lee is actually right to protect her. He is a melee specialist while she is a ranged weapon specialist. It's his job to keep the enemy from getting close to her. That's what melee members of a team are supposed to do: keep the squishier team members out of melee range.

Second is Four's reaction to Gaara's issues. Gaara cannot sleep at all or Shukaku will take over and go on a rampage. That alone is enough for insanity, but he is shown to have Shukaku talking to him quite a bit. He has a crazy, bloodthirsty demon whispering and screaming in his head all day. Plus, the person he cared for most in the world tried to kill him and said that he always hated Gaara and Gaara's mother hated Gaara too. Naruto never had to deal with any of these things.

I can understand that Four is just angry and not acting rationally because Naruto is hurt and was attacked by Baki who is Gaara's sensei, or maybe she just doesn't know how bad Gaara had and still has it. The thing I don't get is how Gai actually agreed with Four's reasoning. If Lee went all out, he could easily kill someone (including Tenten). A spar is a spar because you can't go all out for fear of seriously hurting or killing someone. Plus, Four is a clone, and regardless of her newfound durability she would get dispelled pretty fast by Lee going all out. Tsunade's super strength technique doesn't include the durability that Lee got out of his physical super strength. Naruto is out of commission and cannot recreate her, so that would be a waste.

Kail990 posted a comment on Saturday 18th October 2014 8:05pm

I hope to see an update for this story, its awesome

JokersLastLaugh posted a comment on Monday 13th October 2014 2:48am

This was a really good story and I really really liked it. This is what it mean to be a ninja. No honour or fighting fair and all that shit. If I had been a Naruto ninja I would have fought as dirty and unfairly and cheated as much as I could.

I hope ope this is updated soon because I would love for more.

randumbdave posted a comment on Thursday 9th October 2014 9:45am

OH MY KAMI, we need more of this. This is just a ridiculous hotbed for awesome jutsu ideas. Reminds me of that Sakura-centric story, 'Time Braid'. Sakura, Naruto, Sasuke, and Hinata were all caught in a Chuunin Exam day scenario, but they were all separate most of the time, but occasionally they would share a repeat with one of the others. Naruto eventually made his real transformation into a big monster (i.e. Kyuubi, dragon, Godzilla, etc.) transformation. Sakura basically mastered her elements and healing techniques to the point that she could use Naruto's transformation jutsu to create a real clone. Like a real living body, so she basically couldn't be killed unless you found all her bodies. Anywho, I'd love to see some more o' dis. ;-)

tcl7189 posted a comment on Monday 6th October 2014 11:17pm

Great ride so far... Loving it!!