I'm having trouble finding a job after college and your story literally cracks me up when i need to laugh. On a unrelated note, you write an awesome Hyuuga. People make them so one-dimensional and boring. Glad you're original
Flat out i now want my own pirate ship.
Also, you write a great Hiashi. You also are great at using the 'hn.' To many authors overuse it in an attempt to make the Uchiha into an ass and instead make their story painful to read.
Again, your fox is awesome. Though i am confused, first chapter Kyuubi said it was an it and then later it's all about vixens and now it seems to be a woman. I will admit it's possible i missed something when laughing but yeah. Seemed weird.
And I don't even mind you kissing my mum!!!
Best. Thing, Ever.
Part of maturity is experience, and Naruto, through massive over-use of clones, is certainly getting that. That's true but I think he used them to get use to the concept of maturity slowly but surely
... And the second chapter convinced me that my opinion of the first one was completely accurate.
Great chapter. I just found the new additions and I am looking forward to reading them greatly. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Oh dear God!
This story is wonderful :-D
I LOVE the humor and the chaos generated by Naruto!
The jutsu Naruto comes with have me howling with laugher :-D
Please, update soon!
Moar, we want MOAR!!!!
with that out of my system, this is friggin hilarious, i can't wait to see what happens when they arrive back in Konoha
Gotta love it and hope you update this and hogwarts dawn soon.
This Naruto is certainly powerful. Although I think it was a bit quick. It could've used some more character development. But then again you can't waste too much time on that or it'll become a big information overload problem.
Good work in any case, I'm looking forward for the next update!
Very nice!! XD
looking forward to seeing what Naruto does next
AUGH!!! Must have more!
That's quite amusing. I love your Naruto, he's very good entertainment. The new jutsus are quite unpredictable but that' s why they're so fun. Kawaii no jutsu? Hilarous. The best part of that is that he targets Hanabi for his glomps despite all her protests. Irritating no jutsu is quite funny to read about as well though I suppose that is the point.
I'm making a habit of leaving a review every time I read something awesome 3 times. Keep up the good work!
This is totally epic, and awesome.
this story is insane because of this i want to know if you want a beta for spelling issues and grammar issues i am writing somewhere around fourteen different plot bunnies right know so i cant help with the story propers find me through my email of email@example.com
You made a Yojimbo pun.
You are now one of my favorite people ever.