Content Harry Potter Naruto Buffy the Vampire Slayer XMen Translations

Reviews

studyofchaos posted a comment on Sunday 26th October 2014 1:16pm for Just One Kiss

Nice. All the important stuff said without some of the over the top angst you sometimes see. Thanks.

gara5289 posted a comment on Wednesday 15th January 2014 1:39am for Just One Kiss

Absolutely hilarious - reading Dawn bitch out Buffy, Willow and Giles. All those things you listed are why i started hating the show eventually. Considering I love your HP and Naruto stories I'm confused as to why I'm only reading this now.

Fayari posted a comment on Monday 5th September 2011 3:29pm for Just One Kiss

I wish there was more bashing.

LordSia posted a comment on Thursday 9th December 2010 9:09pm for Just One Kiss

Go DX! Long Live the Dread Pirate Xander! All Hail the Key to the Reality!
Great fic, if a bit short (and lacking in action).

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 10th August 2008 7:47am for Just One Kiss

Excellent work!

brad posted a comment on Friday 22nd September 2006 6:14pm for Just One Kiss

Ah, I enjoyed this, very entertaining. Both for itself and also for the echoes of 'Like a Sister' that it raised; I could see a lot of this earlier tale in the latter, which is still one of my favourite short stories. For all that Hermione is 'the brain' and such, I don't think I've read another tale (other than Kokopelli's Making Change) which had Hermione engage her logic/intellect in arranging her love life, while still keeping her a warm, empathic girl, avoiding any 'Mr. Spock' cliches.

Anyway - ahem! - back to *Dawn* ... this still pushed a few of the buttons that Like A Sister also did. The idea of the girl going ahead full steam to get her man ... using brains/logic to do so ... and pulling in bits and pieces of canon and the characters' prior history to make it all believable. I think in this story Dawn used a lot more of her series' backstory than Hermione had to, but that's because this setting was much more adversarial, I guess, with Dawn having to overcome/convince several people in order to make her conquest.

Fun story, thanks!

dennis1 posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 10:20am for Just One Kiss

Oh my God was that great
Ups and downs and in your face
Brillant

Brad Crawford posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd November 2005 8:25am for Just One Kiss

i hope you plan on writing a sequel! other than that fantastic dawnie story keep up the great writing!

brad posted a comment on Tuesday 28th June 2005 9:32pm for Just One Kiss

well tim i loved this one go dawnie! may she make xander very happy!