Hope
By Jeconais
Very good chapter. Draco was always an idiot.
gunny
HAHAHA i luv how made malfoy look like an idiot and everything running into a tree. HAHAHA i luvd it. this chapter was awsome. keep writing
I just can't get that image out my head... (Malfoy running into a tree)
This was a wonderful chapter and i especially like the end where malfoy ran into a tree nice touch. i really do think that Hope is turning out great so far.
YAY! BEAUXBATON (sp) WON AGAINST DURMSTRANG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! When I read that part, I tried not to scream, I was so excited! I must read more!
Rebecka M.
Oh Gawd.
I want to see Gred and Forge take a wack at Dumbledore with a bludger.
Greatest accomplishment ever, resumé worthy, even.
Okay, that was a unique form of Draco-bashing!
I like the way you set up the 'Potter Turn' from the beginning of the story, and saw it used now. Nicely done!
brikkiant. kept me up till dawn
Great chapter! Loved Harrys cunning plans. Great the Gabrielle used the potter turn to win the match.
This has to be the greatest line in this story, had me laughing so hard:
Harry raised his hands and looked amused. “What? I create a hole in wards that have been worked on for thousands of years and everyone is blasé. I just happen to not be noticed at the back of a
room, and everyone is surprised?”
Harry hugging Minerva was great, especially the "sophisti-ma-cated" line!
Thanks for writing, I really enjoy this story, thanks for writing!
Monkey
Wow, Draco's a creep. Gah. Yay that you updated, I'm so excited. I went back a couple of chapters to remember what's happening. This is possibly my favorite story of all time and I'm so glad there's new stuff to read.
Hi. I rather enjoy this story and have read it multiple times, but just noticed an inconsistency. You start Gunther Stradivis off in this chapter as the Durmstrang keeper, but partway through he switches to seeker. I don't recall which you use later in the story, but here it is slightly distracting once you've noticed it. Other than that, however, this is a very entertaining tale. :-)
"We’ve seen that you can use the magic to do what you want, so control is not the issue – confidence is."
It just struck me that there is an obvious answer to this problem (even though her confidence is already dealt with later):
"Gabby, I order you to fix my poor eyesight without any adverse side effects."
Presto, her Veela magic is not only working on her Mate, but is also doing as the Mate ordered, FORCING her to do it right.
I'm sure this has already been discussed somewhere along the line, but re-reading, it just occurred to me.
I love the way you write Viktor. Gabrielle’s “I want sex” was possibly the funniest line in this whole story. I actually clapped my hands together when I read that Lee was back. Bloody brilliant. Nice revenge too.
hi
hi umm this is kinda weird but. since i dont have you email i guess this is the only option i have.
i was wondering if you knew any fleur/harry fanfics, that you can recommend to me.
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thanks.
by the way great story you wrote (hope).
jamiew
dam that git Malfoy! anyway that was a good chapter!
Very good story. I love the family stuff and the way you are doing Harry's friends. Really good stuff.
gunny
I might have commented on this before, but I *love* Krum in this chapter. :-)
Well... Re-reading it for the eighth time this week. I just love it. I can't find something to point out as out of place in this story, I just love it. ^^
Marie
This is poor word choice. She is often literal with orders. I think this is the fifth time I've read this story. It is one of my favorites. Thank you for your work.