Hope
By Jeconais
But hey, I miss the epilogue! I liked it! Will you please reconsider?
But hey, I miss the epilogue! I liked it! Will you please reconsider?
I would have been interested to have read the deleted epilogue that did not pass muster with the artist, just to see what (s)he thinks is NOT up to snuff. If its half the quality of what I have read, its still a well worth read.
Fallenhunter
Wooster, Ohio USA
hey r u going to update your fics soon
Outstanding chapter. I love this story and really enjoy reading it. This is my third or fourth time reading it.
gunny
this was a good tale of nothing but like i have been saying in every comment HOPE.
i agree with the last comment
... power of hope, because without it you were lost, but with it you could do anything
. i think that is so true when i or my friends have a problem i just look at them and say no matter the problem always keep the most important thing HOPE. yea HOPE.
but anyway it was a great tale and that was a great chapter.
Ahhh, wow. I sincerely thank you for writing this wonderful fic. Harry/Gabrielle is my favorite ship, and I'm eternally grateful to you for writing such an excellent novel-length story about them. :D
It hit me right then, at the part of this chapter where all those people are outside Harry's doors.
Whatever happened to Ginny? I know she and Harry weren't close anymore, but you'd at least expect she be a friend. Unless she really did become a whore like Fred/George implied?
Now THAT'S the way to use foreshadowing; ever since chapter one thre's been the recurring clue to Dumbldore's interference as Gabby referred to 'suddenly' getting the idea to Bond with Harry.
After reading the mess that JKR passed off as the last book, it's clear that either she never learned how to do it properly, or the major plot elements used to finish the series were dreamed up long
after the series started.
I'm one of those fanatical Harmonians everyone talks about; I firmly believe that the books should have ended Harry/Hermione, not Harry/Ginny, and while I can read Harry/Others, reading
Ron/Hermione (the seemingly inevitable default pairing when she's not with Harry) squicks me no end.
That being said, you are one of the very few authors whose non-H/Hr stories I can read and enjoy. Your versions of Powerful Harry/Strong Partner are always thoughtful, creative, and
three-dimensional, and are a pleasure to read. Thanks so much for sharing them, as well as providing space for some other truly talented authors to display their work.
Fenris
PS -- I do wish that you would try your talents on a multi-chapter Harry/ Hermione fic. You consistanty write a Ron who grows into an acceptable partner for Hermione, how about a tale where it
doesn't happen, and Harry has to pick up the pieces?
I loved this chapter! It took me three sittings to finish it, but it was awesome, and I will read the epilogue tomorrow, seeing as I'm yawning non-stop now. Loved the story!
Rebecka M.
Hi
I love this story, and I hope there is still a bit more to come soon. I think you have a very good writing style which brings the characters out very wel, keep it up
david
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