Hope
By Jeconais
Outstanding chapter to a fine story. I like the way you are not going into detail on the sex. Some stories go into such detail that all you get is sex with little bits of other stuff thrown in as
filler. This is much better. Nice writing.
gunny
this chapter was so awsome and i had to stop readin relax think over what i read than start again. HOPE...HOPE...HOPE...HOPE. that is the most perfect word for the tale. HOPE
Ah! Good chapter! I loved reading it! It takes me so long to read your chapters and it's wonderful! I love it! Well, I'll read more later. I have time to spend with people now. Love the
story!
Rebecka M.
Ah! Good chapter! I loved reading it! It takes me so long to read your chapters and it's wonderful! I love it! Well, I'll read more later. I have time to spend with people now. Love the
story!
Rebecka M.
YAY!!! I am so happy for them, this is amazing. man, I love it!!!!
I've finally got a chance to read this and *woo hoo* they're engaged - as usual this was a brlliant chapter - I really do think this is the best fic you have written.
*applauds*
I'll say it again...I wish this story wasn't cumming to a conclusion. This Harry and this Gabrielle are too interesting to not follow their future taking over the WW and maybe, just maybe, washing away a considerable amount of evil from the world.
As a Belgian myself, I'd like to note that Antwerp is located in the country of Belgium, not in Germany.
Hi,
Very nicely written story. Couldn't resist not reading it straight. Hell - got up at 10:30 am in the morning. Had to make an excuse and call in sick for work... Damn You!
That said, please update soon....
Great chapter! I can't wait for the finale.
I don't understand how Hermione can easily block the bond connection between them when she doesn't understand how Harry's magic work? then it would be so dangerous if someone like Molfoy figures
it out and try it on them then?
or does that's not going to work now that Harry and Gabrille has made love to complete the bond fully?
I've shied away from this story for a while now, and just read it straight through. This might be your best work from the mental/psychological angle. I look forward to the next two chapters.
I LOVED IT, thank you so much for updating this story this chapter was great please add more soon. THANK YOU
Yeah!! This is one of my 3 favorite stories ever, and now I have Hope that it will be completed!
This story is wonderful! I've never read a Gabrielle/Harry fic before, but this story has got me hooked. I love all the characters and they way you have portrayed them so realistically despite the whole magic power stuff. Not to mention everyone is in character. I cannot wait for the next chapter to be posted, but until them I'm off to peruse your other fics. Happy writing!!
Just so you know, as it bothered me when i read until i came up with the right word, even in restaurants in hotels, what you called a concierge is actually a maitre'd(i think the spelling is right but am not sure) not a big deal, but i thought it to be something you might want to know. Love the story, update soon please.
Thank you for the update. I was really hoping there would be another this week, but it just increases the anticipation for ch 11. I have one editorial comment. When you describe a pair of
Gabrielle's sandals you call them "patent black leather." Perhaps in the UK the convention is different, but in the US it is called black patent leather because patent leather comes in many different
colors.
I am very much looking forward to what happens in the last Quidittch match and what is wrong with Dumbledore. I have an image of Malfoy bursting in on Harry and Gabby's wedding to try to make trouble
and being swatted like a fly. I look forward to the conclusion of the story.
I admire their athleticism if they are able to dance so well and so long immediately after eating. Perhaps their magic gives them that extra boost.
Great chapter. Please continue.
