Rabidwallaby posted a comment on Sunday 12th May 2013 5:48pm

After reading this story through... again. I realized that I have done the unthinkable and left more requests for updates than positive feedback and for that, I'm sorry! I have read every one of your fics multiple times through the years and will keep reading whatever you put forth the effort to produce.

Keep working your magics and I'll keep requesting updates! Rabid

ohh and some updates for Dawn and Slytherins would be incredible. :)

gtgrouch posted a comment on Wednesday 8th May 2013 4:36am

A fifth house!? Here I thought there would be a third task, then the story would be over!

I'm eagerly anticipating events to follow. Thanks for a great story.

gtgrouch posted a comment on Wednesday 8th May 2013 2:41am

I haven't laughed that hard at anything in a long, long time.

(Let's all wave at Dumbledore!)

gtgrouch posted a comment on Wednesday 8th May 2013 1:02am

He really let Dumbledore have it at the end of the ball.

-damn-

gtgrouch posted a comment on Wednesday 8th May 2013 12:30am

Hmmm . . . I wonder if Harry's going to sleep on the stone floor now, even in the dorm.

Great story so far: creative and well-written.

gtgrouch posted a comment on Tuesday 7th May 2013 11:58pm

My wife is going to complain tonight: I will be prone to giggling on-and-off as I think about the dragon!

gtgrouch posted a comment on Tuesday 7th May 2013 11:19pm

I love this one - a funny take on a serious situation, all plausible.

Looking forward to more.

Tracy0652 posted a comment on Tuesday 7th May 2013 4:15pm

Hi Tim,

Sorry about your recent personal issues - I can somewhat empathize (somewhat because everyone's situation is really unique). Anyway, your stories are always well-written and thoughtful, and go in such unexpected, yet logical directions. I always enjoy when you update, and hope (mmm, yes, selfishly too) that writing fanfic, particularly dawn and perfect slytherins, helps you to feel better.

As always, thank you, and best of luck!!

Tracy

fsponholz posted a comment on Friday 3rd May 2013 8:59pm

Great story.

Mmend15 posted a comment on Friday 3rd May 2013 2:10am

cool. i like this harry, one who has a flare for making the outrageous seem commonplace. its like he makes things absurdly simple that would never actually be that simple in the real world.

its awesome. hope to see more soon

20cent posted a comment on Thursday 25th April 2013 4:02pm

That's a hell of a story. Congratulation for writing this !

It's funny to see how a fic, which was originally centered around a way over the top big Gred and Forge mess, leads to a adult and mature Harry.

My favorite part is the "meeting of the Weasley Twins" in chp 5. It is really well written and perfectly captures the essence of Fred and George. The part about how they don't really know their name is just the best F&G piece ever (well, with Harry and Daphne's marriage in the Matryoshka Vignettes). The flirts with Michael are also hilarious.

I admire your good ideas (new house in Hogwarts, male and female vela, the giant squid aquatical funland, no pairing but a lot of love/sex tension, ...). Moreover, I'm delighted by your choice regarding characters, those you ignore (the eternal Ron, Giny, Malefoy focus is boring), those you change (convincing Dumbledore and Hermione) and those you created (Michael, Kate, {Crush/Squish/Smash/Nash/Trash}-er and Melissa are just wonderful). I'm just wondering about a few person you didn't mention : what about Hagrid (wha does he think about Harry growing up), what about Neville (I can't believe he agrees with Ron's bulls*t) and what about Moody (or whoever he actually is) ?

If I may, a few critiques : a) a few tiny errors in the french words (not a big deal, but well, I'm French, I'm supposed to be arrogant, so I'm pointing it out ... I can detail if you're interested) ; b) Harry is somewhat perfect and overpowerd : not a single flaw ... well, the whole story is over the top so It's not a big problem, but if you really want to make him mature, he'll have to make a few mistakes and learn from them ; c) Kick-Boxing better than Quidditch ? Come on ...

I can't wait to read about the third task !

Vincent

noylj posted a comment on Thursday 18th April 2013 6:05am

May real life be better and may you return to this story

Sweetdoggie posted a comment on Monday 25th March 2013 6:53pm

Great story so far. I feel a litte sorry for Snape to tell you the truth. Sure, he was mean, cruel, and more than a little stupid to bait Harry like that, but his murder was very cold-blooded and I feel that it was out of character for Harry to do that. On the other hand, it seems to work for the story so I'm not going to worry about it. Hogwarts sure went to a lot of trouble for Harry, esp. if he isn't even going to stay. I feel a bit sorry for the castle too. Anyway, really enjoying this. Thanks for sharing your work.

rgshea96789 posted a comment on Monday 18th March 2013 10:18pm

OOOOMMMMGGGG! "dobby do you have a cure for hangovers?" Absolutely brilliant!

sekmarc posted a comment on Monday 18th March 2013 2:08pm

Wonderful story! I'm curious to see how fourth year ends and if Harry's plans for himself manage to go off correctly. I eagerly await your next post; Happy Writing!

yako posted a comment on Wednesday 13th March 2013 1:42pm

Oh God!

I LOL with that!

Exepcional! like always!

Full_Pensieve posted a comment on Tuesday 12th March 2013 12:04am

Just making sure I'm reading this correctly - do you have Fleur as 5 feet, 8 inches tall and 148 pounds? (ten stone eight) Just curious, as that's definitely not the usual portrayal of Fleur -- more World Cup downhill skier than fashion model. Works for me, personally, just surprising.

Full_Pensieve posted a comment on Monday 11th March 2013 11:37pm

Missed this one in February, glad to catch up in March. Glad to see you're writing, it can be cathartic. At least you haven't rewritten to feed Fleur to the dragon - then I might be worried. Being relegated to the Ninth Level of Divorce can affect a fic, for sure -- added 2 yrs to the completion date for one of mine. Keep at it - even if it isn't as rosy as prior Jeconais, it's just as good.

Elaineprt posted a comment on Tuesday 5th March 2013 4:49pm

loved it! Will there be more?

HP-DG-SB posted a comment on Wednesday 27th February 2013 4:58am

I'm going to have to thank E.C. Scrubb on ff.net for pointing me in your direction when I was looking for a great story to read. This story is absolutely great, a totally new way to go about the GoF that I haven't seen done. I'm glad I took the time to catch up to this story and I'll be checking out more of yours to see if I can find any other good ones.

HP-DG-SB