This was great. A nice short story, and I think its absolutely perfect the way you had Harry speak out like this. And I like Voldemort's reaction here too. Very nicely done.
I like this short fic a lot. Well written and believable, if dark. Thanks for posting.
Wow. Very effective, and angst all over the place
depressing...but damn it all if it doesnt ring true. You are one author who has a definite grasp when it comes to the ability to write. your one of the few authors whos works i can actually stand and look forward to re-reading again and again. Please keep up the excellent work
Terrifying, not just because Voldemort will now win, but because this is so close to what could have happened in canon it's scary.
My only complaint is that it was over too quickly. I wanted to see them run and fall one by one.
Not the point of the fic, I know. But a girl can hope, right?
You know, I searched for this story, and was unable to find it. Then, by change, I found it here... and, to my amazement its just as brilliant as I remember it was. I love it and the title describes it perfectly. You are a truly gifted author:D May your muses be merry and active
Easily one of (if not the )finest one shots I've ever read.
Thank you for sharing this...
Really makes one think...
This was very good and made much sense Harry had very little to fight for in the books and nothing just for him and he endured so much.
ouch, loved that...
kind of oddly realistic...
i didn't know draco had that much sense ;p
Aw, poor Harry. I say that the wizarding world gets what they deserve.
Loved the one-shot, I say they all deserved it for what they did to Harry.
Reaching to the heart, fra from your more frequently humorous fics, this one is touching and to the point. It may move some reader to think about their own lives and how they relates to others.
Great work once more.
Very touching. Some parts didn´t really make sense, but I like the scene you created. Very good.
I have to admit, I have often wondered why Harry didn't just give up and move on to "the next great adventure". It seems like he goes through so much shit, and it would be easier just to quit. The story of the hero is inspirational and interesting, but the story of tragic failure is also worth a look. Very intersting.
you know if u added another chapter with Harry reunited with his family in death it would be even greater! Or even if u would continue i would love to see the reactions of Ron&Hermione!! As well as the other Weaselys!! It would be super if u or someone else adds to this! Great story made me cry!! I love a little bit of angst to all the typical Happily Ever After Stories! Though they too are brill! I have read two other of ur stories in addition to this! great job in writing them! THis means war and Hope!! Loved them!!
When you go all out for a story, you have some of the best ones out there. I would have rather seen Harry not kill himself and just leave the world or have a magically binding agreement to not fight with Voldemort but it is your story...
wow.. strong.. and so true.. It isn't so far away from the truth..
makes it more shocking when it already is ^^"