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Wanderer posted a comment on Saturday 26th March 2016 8:12am

So much fun!

Thanks for the Skyrim references, and for giving Harry a way to Become Uber, but not Giving him Uber - as per gimicky goodies out of the CoS.

M

Wanderer posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd March 2016 12:28am

Oh my this is such a fun story. Back for another go - so many other stories out there, so many that fall so short of yours in quality, imagination and just plain Fun :)

M

sheepgrenade posted a comment on Thursday 10th March 2016 11:01pm

Loved the story and was hoping for more, quite sad it finished. Boris is fab by the way, please use the character more.

Noble Korhedron posted a comment on Sunday 31st January 2016 1:41pm

Ugh; this being over sucks, but it was good while it lasted…

Onawa posted a comment on Wednesday 13th January 2016 5:23am

I absolutely loved finding this story. I thought I had read everything you had written so this was a fabulous treat! Also, as a weaver, spinner, and embroiderer I really enjoyed the way you depicted the experience of crafting with such sensitivity and accuracy. As one who has has spent 10 blissful hours at the loom, utterly focused and yet totally relaxed, in 'timeless time' I can attest to the accuracy personally.

I think Harry the Blacksmith is one of my favourite Harrys.

Thanks for sharing your imagination, writing, and hard work with all of us readers!

Gary the Grouch posted a comment on Friday 8th January 2016 5:29am

Don't know if I left a comment already. This is one of my favorite stories. Period. However, I think it would benefit from an epilog.

I just finished my third or fourth reread; still the same, and still as much fun.

Thanks for sharing!

JudyRaie posted a comment on Wednesday 6th January 2016 9:44am

You should like this story that you wrote. It was well written in a way that was easy to read and follow, so you could just enjoy the read. It would be fun to see the gang grow up and see which way Harry's heart leads him, though I woul love to actually see him with both girls since they each hve qualities that would make a whole for him. hmmmmmm :)

BAFan posted a comment on Friday 1st January 2016 7:09pm

Wow. Incredible story! I enjoyed it despite wishing there had been a few "Meanwhile, back at the ranch" moments involving the other Hogwarts students and professors. It would have been nice to read about Ron, Dean, Seamus, et al, coming to the realization that Harry had been telling the truth and they had been acting like petty, envious children. Oh well. Certainly didn't stop me from reading and liking this story immensely.

~Debbie

BAFan posted a comment on Friday 1st January 2016 4:20pm

Excellent chapter! I love how their friendship has grown and become more important than winning, even though they're still competitive. And I'm so glad that Harry is beginning to realize that his instant attachment to Sirius was based more on desperation than on actual liking. Of course, so far at least Sirius hasn't been displaying any of the usual biased, Slytherin-hating, pranks-loving attitude we normally see in fanfics, which makes it easier for Harry (and me) to genuinely like/love him. I am enjoying this a lot.

Now having said all that, I was pondering why I'm not completely happy with this story, and I realized that something is missing (for me, at least). So far the focus has been almost entirely on Harry and Friends, which is understandable. We have very little idea of what is happening outside that group in terms of what the rest of the student body and staff are experiencing. We've been seeing events from inside a Harry bubble, so to speak. I for one would dearly love to know what Ron, Dean, Seamus, et al, are thinking and feeling. Ditto with Voldemort, for that matter.

JMO, of course!

~Debbie

BAFan posted a comment on Thursday 31st December 2015 10:09pm

Very interesting!!

~Debbie

red jacobson posted a comment on Friday 25th December 2015 2:32pm

Hey Tim - Happy Christmas! I just finished (re) reading this story and wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed the hopeful tone of the ending and I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with next.

Red

mwinter posted a comment on Tuesday 8th December 2015 1:17am

Been a while since I last read this story. Still like it now as I did then.

Michael Cornfoot posted a comment on Saturday 17th October 2015 9:08pm

Hey

This is a brilliant stpry. Are you going to do a sequal?

Regards

Michael

4rm36uy posted a comment on Saturday 17th October 2015 5:13am

I've come back to this story after almost a year and it is still as good as I remember.

I can't wait for the next one or an update to your existing ones. = )

ficbob posted a comment on Saturday 10th October 2015 3:24pm

I do like this fic so I hope that you do continue to write what you like and that you will share with us

Thanks

Hagrid posted a comment on Saturday 19th September 2015 7:18pm

Welcome Back! I for one am glad to see you again. As the years have gone by I have seen authors come and go, but the good ones seem to be coming out of semi-retirement. Old Crow, for instance, states that he started a new story after RobST decided not to let one too many ugly reviews stop him. I have never had to worry about one too many reviews of any kind, but as I've wrteen fewer words in total compared to a BobMin56 disclaimer, its understandable. I did not notice any unpolished armor in your storytelling or style, but I did notice a complete lack of overly large groundskeepers in this particular tale. I guess I can see why though, writing Victor speaking in the third person has got to be bad enough without adding my butchery of the Queen's English. Feel free to drop by for some mead when you're nearby.

hpfan123 posted a comment on Monday 7th September 2015 6:49am

firstly, i absolutly loved the story. the only think that could have made it better was if you included a scene where harry got to do some heavy petting with both daph and fleur for his birthday, but i know that that type of scene would have possibly made the relationship between harry and his 'sisters' more complicated. or perhaps between harry astoria and romilda. secondly, i loved all the references to skyrim, especially in harry's combat armor. i could immediatly picture a full set of Daedric armor when you were describing it. i have to say though that the war hammer harry used on mulciber reminded me of Volendrung, which i think would have gone better with the armor because of the pulsing red light Volendrung has. i just wish those bouncing boots were one of them, those things would make mountain climbing so much easier and traveling so much faster. while this is the first story of yours that i have read, it will not be the last i really enjoyed your writing style, so much so that i read this whole story in 2 days and it didnt feel like i was pushing myself to finish like some other 100K+ stories i have read. you really drew me in.

JEP1996 posted a comment on Sunday 30th August 2015 8:37pm

Don't why people disliked I quite enjoyed.. Though I will admit to it feeling rushed in many places like it was never allowed a momnet to flesh itself out into something bigger. Other than that it was fun experinece to read. What with the Zoolander cameo; to the fact that of all the characters were either background characters that much desevrved screen time or simply different in how they are normally portrayed.

WyrdeDragon posted a comment on Monday 27th July 2015 11:36pm

This may be my favorite version of Daphne Greengrass. Certainly my favorite HPDG relationship. Amusingly, I started watching a blacksmithing competition show (Forged in Fire) a few days before I started reading this story. So that was cool, too. Anyway, a cool story. Wish there was a sequel to see how the ships end up.

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Monday 22nd June 2015 4:09pm

Still a pleasure to (re)read.