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Noble Korhedron posted a comment on Sunday 31st January 2016 1:41pm for Chapter 8

Ugh; this being over sucks, but it was good while it lasted…

jilumasam posted a comment on Friday 14th November 2014 8:47pm for Chapter 8

Thanks so much for writing. I've really, really enjoyed this story.

Ceres posted a comment on Thursday 13th November 2014 5:07am for Chapter 8

I absolutely love this story and every time there's a new chapter I read and reread each chapter before this and Hogwarts dawn are my New addiction and I can't help but love it all the more I hope you continue to churn out chapter after chapter I honestly think your stories are some of the only ones I could read and re-read without getting bored

Patches posted a comment on Wednesday 12th November 2014 5:15am for Chapter 8

This is a great story. I love all the connections Harry is making for himself and his friends families. Now they are bringing Sirius into this new venture. I look forward to how this all works out. Thanks for writing. p

The Seeker posted a comment on Tuesday 11th November 2014 12:57am for Chapter 8

Your Harry in this story is so fun to read. His qualities and talents are admirable, yet he's self-effacing and open to anyone with a good heart, whether the person comes from very old money or is a house elf, whether the person is eight years old or eighty. This chapter epitomizes this iteration of Harry, where he wants to get other good people together to continue the fun he and the others had playing Podska. By bringing this group together, some of whom have never talked with the others, we now have that old money getting together to make the magical world a better place . . . and make more money.

There's something liberating reading this story, because the only limitations to what Harry can do are the restraints he puts on himself. You did a very nice job contrasting his effortless artistry and unconscious confidence with his reticence, doubts, and confusion. While this is a different story for you, it still is one of my very favorites of all the ones you've written.

Thanks for all the hard work you put in and the fun you bring to us. Again, my compliments to Luan Mao and Kokopelli for their efforts in your behalf and ours. - The Seeker

jchangpa posted a comment on Monday 10th November 2014 3:58pm for Chapter 8

Well I will drop the story now. I like H/Hr a lot, so I cannot continue as my hope just dye. Is a good story, but not totally of my liking and before giving a bithching review I better leave it here where it still good.

delta11 posted a comment on Monday 10th November 2014 7:41am for Chapter 8

Seriously Jeconais, I freaking love you. I don't know what kind of magic is at play, but every few months I think "I wonder if Jeconais has updated recently" and then I log on to find that you posted something either that day, or the day before. Honestly, your stories could be better. They all seem to follow a pretty basic line that settles down to "Harry coming to age in the most successful way possible". But there is something about them that keeps drawing me back, keeps making me read them over and over again, late into the night. I gave up some French homework to read this, and I don't even regret it. Part of it is definitely the lack of errors. You have great betas and a team behind each of your stories, helping you improve as a writer, and I love that. The other part, I think, is your ability to capture the best parts of life. Sitting here, reading the party scene in this chapter was like being thrown back in time. Maybe I'm feeling a bit homesick after a few months in college, but that was strait out of the crawfish boils or back yard BBQ's of home. It brought me right back to memories in Texas, getting together at a friends house with people I'd gone to school with all my life, all our families talking, having a good time, eating some amazing homecooked food, and drinking way too much beer. It was so clearly written, the memories brought a tear to my eye. Thank you, for what you do. There realy is nothing better than sitting back and relaxing to a fic by Jeconais.

FeNo posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 10:34pm for Chapter 8

What a nice and cute group of totally insane lovely people...

No, seriously it was fun to read, even though maybe the hair was let down half a foot too much to be still comfortable to watch... Boris for example direly needs a "serious" scene some time in the future... maybe a duel when some of their real estate sellers take offense at the deals... anyway something to show he is not just a psychotic cardboard russian with a very strange sense of humor. Not that he wasn't sympathetic and brought a lot of levity to the evening, still... there's something missing in times as they live in.

I'm really ecstatic about the short talk Harry had with Derek about his love life and the little scene with Hermione and him "clearing the waters" about not being depressed that it's not in their future to be lovers was right behind that in favorability. Great ideas and really sensitive writing. Kudos.

I just had a weird idea/thought... it would almost be worth to not immediately off Voldi, but rather bloody him hard and send him to lick his wounds for let's say 3 years, so the end of their "agreement" with Dumbledore nears its end and the smithy things are already far on the path to becoming a real business and all... the parents prank company could also bee booming and maybe it took over the stewardship for WWW? Good ideas make good investments and with the fast way Fred and George diversified in the official books they might even complement Harry's armor and weaponry work... btw will he or rather his "business go to girl" integrate some clause into the vending contracts for armor and/or weaponry to not be wielded in followship to a Dark Lord or something like that?

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 8:40pm for Chapter 8

Hard to say which bit i liked more, there was a plethora of things worthy of compliment in this chapter.

WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 7:57pm for Chapter 8

How funny; Harry's spontaneous get together turned into a business deal that is uniting several families.

GBTtown posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 7:54pm for Chapter 8

Another good chapter. Besides the gold to be made, not enough emphasis was made about the opportunity that will avail itself to make changes in British magical society if the light side overcomes Voldy.

myrthe1203 posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 6:52pm for Chapter 8

I liked it.

The fic Harry Potter: Master of Luck by: ManMadeofLasers (over at FF.net) has Harry seeing the elves as "his" people - he actually helps out in the Hogwarts' kitchens because he enjoys it. You might like the fic - it's well-written and not a Mary Sue or too much cliche.

Pennywise posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 6:45pm for Chapter 8

Aweosme chapter. Loved how you wrote the Krums, Boris is awesome.

sh8ad8ow posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 6:34pm for Chapter 8

Good chapter like always.

scribbler posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 5:15pm for Chapter 8

I'm very disappointed that Harry and Hermione won't be together in this fic. She's such a natural fit for him that it's hard to see her with anyone else.

Otherwise, it's a great story...

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 1:19pm for Chapter 8

Another very well written update with an especially interesting look into the adult side of Wizarding society.

TheWickedTruth posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 12:52pm for Chapter 8

Great chapter, can't wait for more.

keichan2 posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 11:09am for Chapter 8

I LOVED your depiction of the Krum family!

“and took an un-lady-like bite” Bwahahahaha! Georgie, I like, too! :-D

“Harry brungs it,” Bwahahahahahaha!

“I’m trying to put a grumpy face on.” :-D

“Means Elves shall make Harry Potter their king” :-) You got me! I expected Dobby to say that they would be either jealous, or fearing he would take their place ;-p

“Alphonse said very quickly.” Bwahahahahaha!

Thanks for the new chapter!

I hope to read more soon!

DarkWingsDarkWords48 posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 10:20am for Chapter 8

I'm really loving this story, and especially your takes on Romilda and Astoria (and Daphne). man, krum's father is hilarious :D

Just one continuity issue I thought I should point out, that I noticed this chapter. You have the line: " he could see an Asian couple that were clearly Cho’s parents, and an English-looking couple that he guessed where Cedric’s parents "

Harry doesn't know Cedric's mother, but he's already been introduced to Amos Diggory before your AU/divergence point begins - he meets Amos (with Cedric) when they meet up with Amos to take the portkey to the Quidditch World Cup, so he shouldn't need to guess for him ;).

Sanabalis posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 10:10am for Chapter 8

Excellent chapter!