TheWickedTruth posted a comment on Sunday 19th October 2014 10:11am for Chapter 5

Great chapter, can't wait for more.

Addlcove posted a comment on Sunday 19th October 2014 8:13am for Chapter 5

great read, enjoyed the hot chocolate "debate" albus had in his mind :)

louisjventer posted a comment on Sunday 19th October 2014 8:09am for Chapter 5

bloody awesome .i love your work and hope to see more soon.a dawn update would be great also but i can wait.keep up the good work.

Rob Clark posted a comment on Sunday 19th October 2014 7:30am for Chapter 5

Grear part. Excellent take on all the characters, including JKR's most successful villian, Wormtail.

bastiaan posted a comment on Sunday 19th October 2014 7:05am for Chapter 5

great chapter and i loved the ending.

eviaw1 posted a comment on Sunday 19th October 2014 6:31am for Chapter 5

love this story. can't wait to read more and (hopefully)perfect slytherins and hogwart's dawn's well. i wouldn't mind more for your xander/dawn stories either.

Riegert8 posted a comment on Sunday 19th October 2014 6:03am for Chapter 5

Interesting chapter

Davideg posted a comment on Sunday 19th October 2014 6:01am for Chapter 5

once again thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter and as well as for all the time and effort put in to this story please continue as life allows

WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Sunday 19th October 2014 5:55am for Chapter 5

With the description of how the armor formed on Harry this chapter, I was reminded of Iron Man. I hope that Peter pays with pain and fear before he dies. Voldemort should have thought twice before using Harry's blood to be revived, because there are probably curses that could be laid against the blood to affect anyone that is not personally Harry. The other cursing would be that on his death anyone with his blood also dies. I wonder if by using Harry's blood it could be considered an adoption of sorts and therefore Harry could kick Voldemort out of the family and strip him of his magic?

sanbeegoldiewhitey posted a comment on Sunday 19th October 2014 5:11am for Chapter 5

So many good things in this chapter specially that poignant scenes of Harry with Lily.

Nick R. posted a comment on Sunday 19th October 2014 4:47am for Chapter 5

The opening dialogue had the funniest lines I've read in a long while.

Wolfric posted a comment on Sunday 19th October 2014 4:38am for Chapter 5

Another fine chapter. Thanks for writing. W.

migele posted a comment on Sunday 19th October 2014 4:26am for Chapter 5

yet another masterpiece, oh and stolen blood, curses anyone?

Orion posted a comment on Sunday 19th October 2014 3:58am for Chapter 5

I'm glad you've found this fun to write, as it's certainly fun to read. And I like the unsual stuff, such as certain characters being competent, because it is different.

Thank you for writing and sharing with us.

potterfrkintx posted a comment on Sunday 19th October 2014 2:38am for Chapter 5

Another FANTASTIC chapter! To borrow McDonald's tag line..... I'M LOVIN' IT!

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Sunday 19th October 2014 2:07am for Chapter 5

I daresay that Harry will have learned his lesson and the next time he encounters Tom and/or his minions, those he encounters are going to come off very much the worse for wear. Now, if I was him, I think I would definitely design the armor to take hits from multiple AK's, not just a single one. Too bad he can't take the energy and re-use or store it for re-use; that could get rather interesting and get him looking at various ways to use that energy (the powered armor of manga, anime, and mil-sf strikes me as something that could provide some ideas and inspiration).

I quite like the ensemble team that Harry's part of and how they all fit together and are all together more dangerous than individually. Methinks this will become more important as the story evolves.

michaelsuave posted a comment on Sunday 19th October 2014 1:31am for Chapter 5

A good addition, though I am surprised that only dobby was in the infirmary and not several other elves watching over Harry; you know, because he is the one sharing magic with them and if he dies they are in trouble as well as the fact he just got attacked. That part seemed like a bit of a plot hole, but otherwise really liked the chapter and where this story is going. So if a soul worked, then how would having your blood be the source of voldemort's body work for the casting of curses? And how does Harry protect himself from being cursed by voldemort?

red jacobson posted a comment on Sunday 19th October 2014 12:41am for Chapter 5

Always a pleasure to read a new chapter, and I had to laugh at Harry's RoadRunner impression. I was shocked to see the attack from Barty Junior, but it was nice to see Romi going to town

Red

alucard964 posted a comment on Sunday 19th October 2014 12:38am for Chapter 5

I really am liking this story more than most i have read this year so far. I kinda want to see you have harry make an iron man style armor for his battle suit with the bouncy boots included. Also the bouncy boots were some of the most original artifact ideas that i have ever seen. Can't wait till next saturday for the next one.

myredturtle posted a comment on Sunday 19th October 2014 12:27am for Chapter 5

Another great chapter, I'm so enjoying this! Thank you for sharing your creation with us.