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DannyBoy2k posted a comment on Monday 18th July 2016 12:35am for Chapter 3

Umm....you don't think you slipped in your units, there? Five kilos is a lot even for a two-handed sledgehammer, and you wouldn't need that sort of weight in a blacksmithing hammer, since it's about repeated blows, not mass impact. And a 100 kilo anvil is a BRUTALLY large one, not to mention easily more body weight than Harry himself is sporting, most likely.

Meg posted a comment on Monday 10th November 2014 5:44am for Chapter 3

All I can say right now is that I love you , I mean, I love this! If I'd had to read a chapter at a time I'd have been pulling my hair out. So, crazy-busy was good for binge reading! As always, thank you, and I'll get in-depth when I'm done.

Hytekrednek posted a comment on Friday 10th October 2014 6:09pm for Chapter 3

So far this has been a highly entertaining story. As always I look forward to all of your work and cant wait till the next update. James

Encarnia22 posted a comment on Friday 10th October 2014 4:05pm for Chapter 3

Another great chapter. I love this rendition of the first task as well as the inclusion of Daphne.

Your rendition of Romi reminds me a bit of Harley Quinn from the Batman universe, who can be all over the place as well as more then a bit vindictive.

Anyway, keep up the great work. Can't wait to read more.

sanbeegoldiewhitey posted a comment on Wednesday 8th October 2014 8:50pm for Chapter 3

Simply enjoyable to read. The "Que Sera, Sera" song of Malfoy really cracked me up. And Warrington was really scared of the armored Harry. I likes the new agreement of Tori and Romi to stay friends whoever Harry chooses and only curse if the lucky girl is not one of them. Brilliant.

diagonalpumpkin posted a comment on Tuesday 7th October 2014 12:02pm for Chapter 3

Great chapter once again. I like that we are getting some more view into Astoria and Romilda, and that they have decided to remain friends, regardless of what happens. I also enjoyed the Zoolander references (even if I failed to put together that Derek was a reference until he started talking about it). As much as I usually like Amelia (for the reasons that you mentioned in your note) it is kind of good to see her portrayed in a different way. Keep up the excellent work. I'm excited for your next chapter :D

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 7th October 2014 9:53am for Chapter 3

This is a great story. I really love all the different angles being talked about. I'm glad Harry is happy and busy. That and he is learning a lot. Helping the elves was fantastic and I love the way they tell wizards off now. They are free and happy to work if they are appreciated and not hurt. Of courst some old purebloods don't want to agree to that. I'm glad Dumbledore apologized to Harry and told the school that Harry did not entere himself in the tournament. Harry's armor and skills are fantastic. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. p

freeze107 posted a comment on Tuesday 7th October 2014 8:41am for Chapter 3

I really enjoy this story. its such a refreshing change of pace from the norm that I cant help but keep reading it. I am terribly exicted for the summer scenes where he visits with the families now. Also excited for more forign scenes, never come across a fic like that so far. Solid Gold!

WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Tuesday 7th October 2014 12:01am for Chapter 3

Definitely enjoying this story so far. One question that comes up, other than the Skyrim references, is what other games are you going to allude to? Will Harry figure out something as strong or stronger than Deadric? So many people are going to be ruined with Romilda being so curse-happy.

millercommamatt posted a comment on Monday 6th October 2014 10:23pm for Chapter 3

Did I get rick-rolled? No. But it feels like I was rick-rolled.

I imagine that anyone even acknwledging the NKotB reference is dating themselves. Alas.

firedawg posted a comment on Monday 6th October 2014 2:15pm for Chapter 3

Great story and thank you for writing an entertaining , and different tale. I haven't read anything with Romilda other than the usual "girl hot for Harry" its nice to see someone take the time to as it were give her a chance to be a normal person. Well done.

mwinter posted a comment on Monday 6th October 2014 12:19am for Chapter 3

Awaiting more.

BJH posted a comment on Sunday 5th October 2014 11:42pm for Chapter 3

So Harry Potter as Ironman, huh? His Mark I suit is basilisk but his Mark II will be dragon, and since he made a point of keeping the heart I'm guessing heart strings in the gauntlets will give him the ability to cast spells. Now if he can just work out the flying bit. Will Daphne fill the role of Pepper Potts? I really like this characterization of Daphne, btw. Will she reach the point where she wants him to want her?

BJH

Bigguns123 posted a comment on Sunday 5th October 2014 11:34pm for Chapter 3

I Love reading your work, you are an artist. Thank you for sharing your gift with the rest of us.

red jacobson posted a comment on Sunday 5th October 2014 11:02pm for Chapter 3

Another enjoyable chapter, and I'm liking this version of Albus. I'm very appreciative of the fact that you waited until you had the story finished before starting to post, so we don't have the agony of waiting for an update (I know I'm probably one of the last people who can complain about that, but, meh *GRIN*)

See you next week

red

The Seeker posted a comment on Sunday 5th October 2014 10:40pm for Chapter 3

This story keeps getting better and better. Derek reminds me of Lockhart but redeemed by his self-awareness. Harry's bout with the dragon was appropriately epic and more charities will get donations as a result of the slaying. Lucius' little ditty was hilarious, but bringing Draco in made it even better. Your revised Amelia and Fudge were actually fun to read, as was the Prophet's editor in chief. And finally, Romi and Astoria remain wonderful characters in your very creative hands. Looking forward to the next chapter! - The Seeker

Pamela St Vines posted a comment on Sunday 5th October 2014 8:44pm for Chapter 3

Wow, this is a great tale. Who knew blacksmithing could be so excited? Thanks for another great read.

tcl7189 posted a comment on Sunday 5th October 2014 6:52pm for Chapter 3

Awesome chapter!!!

Michael10 posted a comment on Sunday 5th October 2014 4:56pm for Chapter 3

thank you for another chapter and as always keep up the good work

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Sunday 5th October 2014 3:38pm for Chapter 3

A great update, I especially like the part where the children were still children.