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Fic Chick posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd March 2017 7:07pm for Chapter 1

If Barty's AK hit Moody then why was he still alive to punch & berate Albus?

Wanderer posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd March 2016 12:28am for Chapter 1

Oh my this is such a fun story. Back for another go - so many other stories out there, so many that fall so short of yours in quality, imagination and just plain Fun :)

M

BAFan posted a comment on Thursday 31st December 2015 10:09pm for Chapter 1

Very interesting!!

~Debbie

Le_Thorne posted a comment on Friday 22nd May 2015 5:30am for Chapter 1

I would just like to say, I bloody love this story so far. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it.

gtgrouch posted a comment on Monday 24th November 2014 5:16am for Chapter 1

Wow! What a wonderful start to a story!

Although I could have done without the insinuation of the headmaster's proclivities. That should have been filed under 'way too much information.'

Slytherin66 posted a comment on Sunday 2nd November 2014 3:36pm for Chapter 1

A great chapter.

It's good to see Romilda involved in a fic as she is very overlooked character.

A nice twist regarding Daphne that is very rare.

I liked the banter between Romilda and Astoria.

I wonder if Ron will be in Hogwart's a History as the "smelliest Weasley"

A great line “A bull in a china shop is an analogy, not a guide line,”

Hagrid is not a good teacher even when he loves the subject a bit like Snape.

“Ears of a puma, that one,” I wonder if that is a sign for an animagus form.

Well put "Mum married him in a fit of lust, but he does love her back, and he tries" that is how I viewed Fleur/Bill in the books.

An interesting point every tournament would expose loopholes or clever solutions to each task. I wonder if people died in the tournament because it was made to difficult and the magical world loves a spectacle.

I am glad there is someone Snape can't bully and deeply thankful Harry and Hermione are just friends as a couple they would not work she is too bossy and the pairing has been done to death. Still a fic with Hermione in the background is best as she tends to take over or do all of Harry's thinking for him.

Hermione is acting like a bully like the Dursley's demanding things of Harry.

I like Romila I hope Harry gets lots of hugs in this story he needs them. I am pleased someone stood up for Romila and Astoria nobody has done that for Harry since his mother and father died. Even Sirius let him down.

Good to know about blood use in magic and about Blood Quills.

Curses are a very overlooked aspect of magic in fanfics we know the DADA job is but nothing else is ever said or done. I like the idea of Wormtail suffering very much.

Harry's fame is a powerful weapon he squandered in the books.

I do like Romilda's spirit and what she said about the House of the brave.

A house elf party would be wild I think. I wonder who Kreacher gets magic from?

S.P.E.W has been stopped well done Harry. Maybe the free elves could be convinced to help Harry out when it comes to dealing with people like Riddle, Albus and the Dursley's. One elf is formidable an army is unstoppable. The insults to Albus were fantastic I doubt he has been spoken to like that since he was young.

I always wondered if a person could renounce their house thanks for that detail. I am glad Minerva got a shock she is a terrible head of house.

The Headmaster and English Ministry in trouble is always fun. Dumbledore losing his temper was good too as it rarely happens. I bet Umbridge was a terrible student. Albus is full of surprises I did not expect him to reflect and change his ways.

A great line " almost encouraging his enemies to work against him, so that he could defeat them in other ways."

I liked finding out what is going on in the other houses.

A brilliant line for Snape " He still might have gotten away with it, if it wasn’t for those meddling kids."

I am pleased about Moody I always liked him and thought he deserved better than what JKR had planned for him.

Thanks for doing something with Astoria and Romilda. A pity about no romance as I think Harry could do with some love in his life to make up for the lack of it growing up but Hogwart's might not be the best place for him given his fame. For helping the elves I expected Dobby to get Harry a Veela wife. It would be in the elves interest for Harry to have many magically powerful children just in case it take a while for them to totally free themselves.

brad posted a comment on Thursday 30th October 2014 5:26am for Chapter 1

You had me worried for a while there that you were going to have Hermione estranged from Harry, and I was ready to curse Romilda for stopping her from going right after Harry as she had in the canon.

So I was quite relieved to read that she caught up with Harry shortly after. Thank goodness, this story would still have Harry and Hermione getting together and pairing up and getting married and --

> That said, there is no romance involving Harry in this. A couple of side characters do get together, but Harry doesn't.

Wait, what? Oh, poo.

The jokes about Daphne were honestly quite funny. As is the dynamic between the two kids. 'The Gypsy and the Brain' ... sounds familiar, like a cartoon I used to watch. :-)

> In the corner of her eye, Ron looked like he was fuming, and she found that she didn’t care.

What she said. Sorry, Ron.

No, wait, I'm not sorry. :-)

> Hermione rushed around the table, and hugged Harry.

Awww. One of the best lines.

A good start to the story, thanks!

HopelessFan posted a comment on Sunday 12th October 2014 10:54am for Chapter 1

I've ead a lot of fics, but never seen a "Harry freeing the elves by powering them" plotline. Facinating :-)

Hytekrednek posted a comment on Friday 10th October 2014 1:05pm for Chapter 1

Loved the first chapter. Another amazing story as I have come to expect from you. Looking forward to reading the rest of the story. I especially like the way that you did the house elf and Hogwart's house issues. James

jilumasam posted a comment on Sunday 5th October 2014 2:40am for Chapter 1

oooh yeah another great story :D

Thanks :D

Dellaran posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 10:07pm for Chapter 1

Great start. Your Astoria, Daphne, and Romilda are wonderfully vivid characters. Thank you for sharing your writing with us all.

Jay1 posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 3:03pm for Chapter 1

i love what you've written so far and as always i'm very excited to see where you take this next. that said, your use of the word "gypsy" and your take on romani culture as being about curses and so revenge oriented is pretty problematic. many romani people consider the term "gypsy" to be a slur and it has been used throughout history (and still today) to justify violence and oppression of the romani people. it is exceptionally unlikely that romilda would identify as a "gypsy" rather than as romani. frankly it is pretty unlikely that she would even tell someone she didn't know very well about her heritage given the usual reaction to that sort of thing. it might be a good idea for you to do a bit of googling about the use of the word and about romani culture in general.

jilumasam posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 10:33am for Chapter 1

Thanks for a great story. Am enjoying Tori and Romi very much. Great to see such minor characters getting a chance to shine.

Hope the editing process goes smoothly with the rest of the chapters.

sanbeegoldiewhitey posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 7:43am for Chapter 1

I am pleased that you have started another Harry Potter story. First story I have read where Romilda Vane is being portrayed in a positive light. I like your characterization of Astoria. Your Daphne here is the exact opposite of your Daphne in Perfect Situation. It is Astoria who resembles that Daphne.

vicare posted a comment on Sunday 28th September 2014 7:27am for Chapter 1

Great story, well beginning is... Hope the rest of it will be as perfect as this first chapter. I have to admit I first thought the story was named "Blue Balls" ;-)

mcdanelsnd posted a comment on Saturday 27th September 2014 2:07am for Chapter 1

great start cant wait to see what happens next

The Seeker posted a comment on Friday 26th September 2014 10:21pm for Chapter 1

An HP update from you is always fun. Love how you adopted Romilda and Astoria to be your agents of change/spokespeople and poked holes in the Ice Queen persona of Daphne. As cute as the interplay between and flat out brilliance of Tori and Romi was, the chapter really turned with the quiet revolt of the house elves and the introspection of Dumbles and his heads of house. Wonderful way to highlight the atrocious behavior that was rampant throughout the HP series and especially so in GoF. Can't wait for next week's update. Thanks for this treat!

makarva posted a comment on Friday 26th September 2014 8:40am for Chapter 1

interesante, me anoto para seguirla

cliviussum posted a comment on Friday 26th September 2014 7:50am for Chapter 1

As a reader of many stories - fan fiction or fully published - I always look forward to a new story from your pen. Despite the well-used theme of the Tri-wizard tournament, you have again found a new angle and a plot that seems to be teaching the world of wizards a harsh lesson. I like this story very much and look forward to next weeks episode. Ave atque vale - Clivius.

HP-DG-SB posted a comment on Thursday 25th September 2014 8:40am for Chapter 1

Very good start. As usual, I expected to see great work from you and I'm not disappointed. This was a great first chapter and certainly a new take that I haven't seen before. I'm very glad that I've put you on my alerts' list. Keep up the wonderful work, I'm anxious to read the next chapter.

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